aight...how about now?
 

i changed the font and shit...how does it look now?

i dont like the font........and you need a better background....pretty good blending.............but yo....since we both are relatively new........wana do a gfx battle....pm ya decision......

its too plain, but you startin to realise the colour flow matters n shit.

exactly....keep at it tho

easily one of ytour best... you atill got a long way to go bout your doing alryyt.... the picture and the background blend really well together but the font is kinda hanging there it doesnt really do anything definatly your best yet though 7/10

font sucks, u need a bg also.. 7/10