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Capitol vs Hammer
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 02-13-05 at 07:01 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. DQ'ed for recycled / similar Walt Disney line to http://community.rapverse.com/showp...134&postcount=4 |
Hammer has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 07:01 PM.
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Capitol has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 07:02 PM.
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I'm Puttin The "Hammer" On His Career Quicker Then He Can React Impact His Brain, Infact, I'll Crack Him Man, And That's Laying A Fact His Only Chances Of Beating Me Is In Imaginated Scheme Like Walt Disney Kid's So Whack He Has To Make 50 Free Agent Threads Saying Pick Me I'll Slam His Punches With Another Loss Leaving Him With A Record Of 1-5 He Couldn't Flow If He Was Water, So I Form A Damn And Leave Him 1 Side You Got One Win, Shit The Vote System Must Of Had A Sevier Glitch This Prick Get His Head Split With A Axe Kid And Now, I'm Boning His Bitch.................... |
Capitol’s like my pet reptile kept in captivity Crafty using an alias to keep his activity* Wrist actions been pumped too much recently Guessing ya friends wins like u been stalkin and sleazy** Ya cheesy rhymes aint winning you shit you herb Bitches like capitol “should be seen and not heard” Word to that, herb is slapped, got nerdy chats Don’t need to work in an abattoir to murder this cat*** *his alias got no wins so he dont battle much on this one **posted a guess at Poetic's thread for how many wins he has altogether ***abattoirs are where they kill animals |
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Voted For: Capitol
Voted for Capitol Cap got dis due to heavier punches Ok flow for both was good so that ened up in a tie I could stay with both of you so hats off to both of u for that Punches (Most important in battlin) went to: Cap he came stronger n more to the point now Hammer had sum punches as well but they werent as storng plus I seen one of his lines n another song earlier battle earlier in this day THE LINE OF REPEAT: By Hammer Bitches like capitol “should be seen and not heard” The same line n another battle cant member who but the battle was posted a while ago so it is newer then this battle but if it is a meer coinsidence it still wouldnt matter this does not effect my vote! Hammer ya flow was good structure was good as well ya punches fell a little short multies neither seemed to have any Personals- have to give it to Capitol (the whole record thing) Breakdown: Flow- Tie Structure- Tie Punches- Cap Multies- Neither Personals- Cap Good battle overall CAP- 7/10 HAM- 5/10 holla back return the fav fams Not Hatin, Jus votin Plz dont hate vote me for postin honest votes homies plz |
^^Thanks Man, Good Looking, I'll Return The Favor When I Get Back, Drop Another Vote For My Other Battle, And I'll Return The Favor Twice |
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Voted For: Capitol
Capitol....... I'm Puttin The "Hammer" On His Career Quicker Then He Can React Impact His Brain, Infact, I'll Crack Him Man, And That's Laying A Fact decent opener here....hit pretty good His Only Chances Of Beating Me Is In Imaginated Scheme Like Walt Disney Kid's So Whack He Has To Make 50 Free Agent Threads Saying Pick Me lol nice personal.....hit great... I'll Slam His Punches With Another Loss Leaving Him With A Record Of 1-5 He Couldn't Flow If He Was Water, So I Form A Damn And Leave Him 1 Side nice...i was feelin this You Got One Win, Shit The Vote System Must Of Had A Sevier Glitch This Prick Get His Head Split With A Axe Kid And Now, I'm Boning His Bitch.................... i liked the set up line...but didnt like the punch....should have closed it w/ something different Hammer.............. Capitol’s like my pet reptile kept in captivity Crafty using an alias to keep his activity* decent opener...ok personal here...could have been worded a lot better Wrist actions been pumped too much recently Guessing ya friends wins like u been stalkin and sleazy** again should have worded it different...but still an ok personal Ya cheesy rhymes aint winning you shit you herb Bitches like capitol “should be seen and not heard” hit decently here...... Word to that, herb is slapped, got nerdy chats Don’t need to work in an abattoir to murder this cat*** pretty good wordplay here...nice way to close it out.... overall..........i felt capitol had the more consistent verse of the two.....his punches hit a lot better....both had nice personals......originality goes to capitol......so vote goes to cap for harder hitting punches and creativity |
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Voted For: Capitol
u got cap...hammer alrite u had good personal concepts but how u worded dem was real wack and u tried da make ya whole verse personal switch it up spit a hott punchline like ya last line....cap good verse some of ya lines b long so fix dat up u had a few nice punhclines and u switched it up instead of makin ya whole shit personal which was good...u were more consistant thru out dis battle opener-cap strucuture-hamm punchlines-cap multis-cap had a few wordplay-cap personals-hamm took dat by alot finisher-hamm even tho u could of worded it betta enjoyed-cap....overrall his verse was betta |
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