Keystyle, Blah
 

i'm oh so Authentic, always Eccentric, Creativity to the Maximum
If a nigga neglect his rhymin duty then ya know i'm Taxin-'Em...
Niggas stay 'Flexin' on my Style...
Like they copy n pasted a computer File...
An put it on they desktop for everybody too Witness..
But they cant ''keep up the pace'' like a fat mans Fitness...
I'll stick ''Slugz'' to ya skin n have you leakin 'Red Fluid'...
They call me the Lyrical 'Wizard' With 'Potions' Like a 'Druid'...
My consistancys Fluent, Ya always catch me on Point..
An you gonna try an ''Bite-off-mine'' Like the end of a 'Joint'...!
Like using 'Anointment' On ya hair its drippin an your 'Wet Behind the ears'...
Ya pussy an you always try n 'Get Behind ya Peers'...
I'ma be Like 'Cheers' n Clown you with my 'Bars'...
..An you couldnt ''Pull the strings' For a hot verse even if you was playin the Guitar!

good flow and wordplay...but kinda tounge twisty in some spots...clear that shit up and its good...6/10 fam...holla

was cool. definately read like a freestyle. Some nice lines in there, good wordplay in parts and couple nice multis.

"I'll stick ''Slugz'' to ya skin n have you leakin 'Red Fluid'...
They call me the Lyrical 'Wizard' With 'Potions' Like a 'Druid'..."

^^Stood out. Like i said, definately some nice lines in there

Appreciated homeboy

I'll hit up ya open mic with some feed

Uppin y'all

it was ok, for a freestyleit had some pretty decent ideas in there and some good punches. but structure was kinda messed up n it got difficult to read in some parts nah mean. but its just a freestyle againso theres no need to b all critical n shit. so an ok drop
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this was nice stuff.....nice structure, nice flow, vocab was aight......wordplay was good
Cause our 'spits' so ''Refreshin'' they thinkin we 'Got Sprite'
^^^feelin this line...keep doing it

Why thank you ever so much You sweet little thing...
i cant express how delighted i am you think my raps are hot.......
:D

But on the real, the feedback is appreciated, hit me with a link an i'll spank you...
Naw, jokes, send a link n i'll drop some feed on your shit too



Uppin y'all...

^^^lol sorry i posted that in the wrong place it was supposed to go where your other drop was at...the freestyle

aight then

Well my comment goes too the other freestyle you was suppose to post this in then

Peace :D



Uppin for more feed y'all