Khaos_daRenegade vs Ltizzle
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-11-05 at 09:54 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 09:25 PM.

Ltizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 09:38 PM.

I paint picturez like JJ did
an keep heataz dat be tarin up ya block like baybayz kidz
and u know da nigga hotta dan hot
I got a lil bitty lazer but itz blowin off alot of ya top
u want drama u can lie n a case
even yo mama gone have a hard time identifyin ya face
2 hot i think I'm neva gone cool off
an my dope B havin phenze nozez lookin reda dan rudolph
wanna kill me but u try 2 late
an wen i gotta gun itz lightz out like y2k
I wuz poor but i turned it 2 wealth
I let da world know i got more birdz dan da kearnal himself
an niggaz know I'ma shysta fa da loot
soon az we make a deal u gettin shot by da snypaz on da roof
and u a lame who always talk to cops
i dont usually sell pussy but ima put u on da auction block

you gon get stirred up and spit out, like sour lemonade
cause dawg your name says it all...you jus a "renegade"
a "khaotic" structure, leave yo brains goin both ways like yo sister
cause yo flow backs up so much it stays and causes a blister
kid only win you got was caused by a DQ, i see your spittin ish
you the toilet bowl that swallows shit and raps your dead gold fish
like hispanics in french class, noone understands what you spittin
a banana with a split will, leave you aching while you splittin
infact ill impact you, you couldnt have tight flow if you was a wrench
so like untalented basketball players...
...yo crew leaves you on da bench
1-5 record says you whack, dawg cant you see?
the most "khaos" that you caused is by battlin me...

lol dumb ass nigga shoulda researched harder and you'll see i lost 4 of the 5 because of closed battles

This was feedback posted for Ltizzle
 

TIZZLE's FIRST TEXT BATTLE.........

word mayn..........nice shit here

lmao ok....
nice drop anyways....

Voted For: Ltizzle

First Off I'm Going To Break It Down Like This, LTizzle Had Some Decent Punches In His Verse, Toilet Bowl Line Was Creative, Ha Had A Decent Opener And His Closer Was Good, Multi's Well He'll Work On That, Also Had Some Meta's In Here Which Helped Out In This Battle, Good Verse Kid
Khaos Had A Few Stretched Lines That Didn't Help Him Out At All Also He Needs To Up His Vocabulary, Both Of You Need To Up Your Vocab A Little But It Was Good For LTizzle Your First Battle, Found This Intresting Here, Coz LTizzle Never Battled Before And He Has, Anyway, My Vote Goes To LTizzle

Return The Favor If You Can, Lol Links In My Signature

weerd man....thanks for da vote....
upppin shit for some more...

Voted For: Ltizzle

you gon get stirred up and spit out, like sour lemonade
cause dawg your name says it all...you jus a "renegade"
infact ill impact you, you couldnt have tight flow if you was a wrench
so like untalented basketball players...
...yo crew leaves you on da bench

VS

and u know da nigga hotta dan hot
I got a lil bitty lazer but itz blowin off alot of ya top

Damn tizzle never seen you do text before, you aight but keep elevating man, you got the structure mastered but work on just dissing your opponent and not selfglorifying you got me?

Khaos please elevate son, you need to work on the structure, your verse makes me laugh

I wuz poor but i turned it 2 wealth
I let da world know i got more birdz dan da kearnal himself
^^^seriously...what on earth is this?

Overall I voted for ltizzle for better flow and structure, and most of all, better punches.

Please return the favor, drop a vote to the battle in my sig thank you.

uppn for some votes.....
ill make sure and hit dat one u in your sig aurora....

Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

ehh

I dont know how to vote

Both Came Kindof Weak in some places

Vote removed

Oops ment to hit Feedback....lol....Going to get strobe to fix it

ehhh uppin for some more votes here.......
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