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...OrigiNATE... 07-22-02 04:05 PM

Attempted "MurdeR"
 
Intro: (To Te Beat Of Oh No! By LudaCris)

Click,Click,means the processs has started,
Bang,Bang,means the bulets have departed,
Oh no,means they comin for you,
Twin Glocks,eans they comin in two,
Watch out,you dont wanna GET HIT!
Stay Clear,Or you might get yo WIG SPLIT!

Here goes a 'one-eyed' perspect like its comin from pirates,
Heres a story teaching to resist gang violence......

Story.......Simple but has meaning and a twist..

Two boys lookin to get innitiated,
Went along on a drive-by and participated,
So they rolled up on someone elses block,
And Started Sprayin Shells out the glock,
In the car a loud-mouthed crip,
Said "Shoot That kid in tha red outfit",
Click,Click,the process has started,
Bang bang,means the bullets have departed,
The kid shot again w/ intent to harm,
First shot went right thru his arm,
(second kid)
It was his first time packin heat like a new furnace,
He missed his shot cuz he was too nervous,
So he decided to Unleash the 9,
And he ended up unpiecen his spine,
(The AfterMath)
The leader said "you're in now wasnt that simple"
They were proud not knowing that kid was now cripple,
The kid said "At first I was mad cuz I mised him",
I know every aggonizing detail cuz I as the victim....

True story...I wrote it from My cripple friends point of view...

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 08-04-02 02:40 AM

Excellent storyline , but sorry that its tru ...
Mad flow, tight concept ...
I think the topic you picked is a big issue in
society and has been fo` some time/
Gang & Violence ... props fo` reachin deep
and writting this /


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