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SPuL™ 02-12-05 04:17 PM

Technical vs SPuL
 
Battle Rules:

8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 02-12-05 at 04:47 PM

Must drop verse in 480 minutes after check in.

System 02-12-05 04:18 PM

SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 04:18 PM.

System 02-12-05 04:21 PM

Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 04:21 PM.

SPuL™ 02-12-05 04:41 PM

Askin' me about "Ghosting", fuck, I write my own lines
Man, you'd only win if I wrote your verse... and you wrote mine
My rhymes all break yo spine, man, you really got no chance
it's as 'bout as good as someone wit no legs tryin' to dance
Lets get right down to facts, if you wanna get all "technical"
you throwin akward punches like the Pistons-Pacers specticale
When these fools step to me, it ain't gon turn out well
Cuz S, P, u, oh yea, bitch, here's yo L <<< PEEEP LINK!!!!! :thumbup:

Technical 02-12-05 09:02 PM

I Guess His DickRyding On Strobe'll Never End, Once Again Homeboi Sufferin From Line Negligence
"Boy"Listen Man, "SP"Only "Advances" To First When Commencing About "Game" References
Ranked 1st In The Tourney Huh?...Dukes Was Prolly Lovin It...Felt No One Could Uncomfort Him
But How Could Dat Occur...Especially When He Can't Win A Battle When "Hotshh" Is Put On Him*
Listen Dude...I Been Checkin Ur Baby Pics....Leaves Me To Ask Who Could Birth This Foo?...*
"Junior" You On Virtue Dick Often...He Prolly Nutted More Times That Your Ghostwriter Wrote Fo You (ouch)
Me Get Murdered In TECHS(text)?..Dude Was Quick To Move To "Audio" When "Hotshhh" Ripped Ya..He's Ur Daddy
Dis Bitch Feels Sorry For Da "Troop"s So He Hopped On The "Jock" Of Superior Methods And Asked If Troop Was Happy(fag)


I Rest My Case!

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Hotshh murked dis foo in a tournament battle
he got some baby pictures going around called "the real spul jr"

Technical 02-12-05 11:28 PM

uppin for more votes lets go.............................

Replay 02-12-05 11:50 PM

Voted For: SPuL

I Guess His DickRyding On Strobe'll Never End, Once Again Homeboi Sufferin From Line Negligence
"Boy"Listen Man, "SP"Only "Advances" To First When Commencing About "Game" References
^^^^second line was good opner was gay
Ranked 1st In The Tourney Huh?...Dukes Was Prolly Lovin It...Felt No One Could Uncomfort Him
But How Could Dat Occur...Especially When He Can't Win A Battle When "Hotshh" Is Put On Him*
^^^^don't no what your talking about so i don't like the line
Listen Dude...I Been Checkin Ur Baby Pics....Leaves Me To Ask Who Could Birth This Foo?...*
"Junior" You On Virtue Dick Often...He Prolly Nutted More Times That Your Ghostwriter Wrote Fo You (ouch)
^^^^no need to talk about your own lines but it was ok
Me Get Murdered In TECHS(text)?..Dude Was Quick To Move To "Audio" When "Hotshhh" Ripped Ya..He's Ur Daddy
Dis Bitch Feels Sorry For Da "Troop"s So He Hopped On The "Jock" Of Superior Methods And Asked If Troop Was Happy(fag)
^^^^not bad but stop talking about shit that some readers wouldn't no about
5/10


Askin' me about "Ghosting", fuck, I write my own lines
Man, you'd only win if I wrote your verse... and you wrote mine
^^^^i nice lololol
My rhymes all break yo spine, man, you really got no chance
it's as 'bout as good as someone wit no legs tryin' to dance
^^^^wack
Lets get right down to facts, if you wanna get all "technical"
you throwin akward punches like the Pistons-Pacers specticale
^^^^not bad
When these fools step to me, it ain't gon turn out well
Cuz S, P, u, oh yea, bitch, here's yo L
^^^^kinda wackish
5.5/10

it was super close but i hated tech's style

Sik Wit It 02-12-05 11:51 PM

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 
good battle...too bad SPuL up in my crew though
...

Technical 02-12-05 11:56 PM

coo coo uppin fo more votes yo....and if u dont understand the pucnhes just dont fuckin vote...simple

SPuL™ 02-13-05 10:16 AM

upp............................................... .................................................. ..

Kawn Flixx 02-13-05 10:20 AM

Voted For: SPuL

damn bitchass spul isn't a bitchass at all :shcocked:

Technical:you tried to hard to get vocab points.
you lines were streched badly,the game boy advanced sp
thing was ok,but come on will you really say that in a battle?
be real,text is more complex,but it should be left to right
not left to right to middle to left again crap.

Spul:Your verse was dope,Tight flow
and the closer and similes were crazy.
The opener was dope also.
can't think of anything wrong right now.

winner/Spul jr.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

SPuL™ 02-13-05 01:37 PM

aiight 2-0 me. upp............................................... .................................................. .............

N.Tavarez 02-13-05 02:54 PM

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 
was going to vote...saw something disturbing

tech its ok to put my name in ya verse once but twice?
thats a strech........im not his daddy
i beat him in THAT battle...
spul will own niggas...and he beat you in this
u tried too hard....

Kordozar 02-13-05 03:04 PM

Voted For: Technical

Wow Both Yall Verses Wass Horrible Spul Some Ya Shit Didn't Rhyme And Ya Punches Was Homo..

Openor=Tech,Spul Openor Wass Retarded Said Man 2 Much
Punches=Tech,Had Harder Punches Wasn't Decent Tho
Personals=Tie Both Had Ok Personals
Vokab=None
Strukture=Spul Good Strukture
Wordplay=None
Closer=Tech,Ok Closer Spul Shit Aint Even Rhyme

Overall Technical Came Harder Had A Better Verse Than Spul And Had Better Punches Than Spul

/V Technical................


Crew Vote removed

SPuL™ 02-13-05 03:08 PM

^wow, you're a complete retard. How does "L" and Well not ryme? lmfao such a homo. kid go back to school or shiot fo reel. I don't care if you vote against me, but make it seem that you actually understood what goes on. ;) Kids like this are herb voters, but don't matter. 2-1 uppin.......


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