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Effect 02-13-05 05:58 PM

Turned Crazed
 
im pissed off and need to let some rage release
set fire to bitches watching there faces scream
im shineing like a lazer beam need to let some steam
my minds so wicked you'll wish wat i says a dream
All I see is pain mutha fuckers sayin im no fame
what a shame im more you cause Im not the same
im not gonna rap ur way this has to be an out rage
im gonna be rappin on stage aside wid an animal cage
flippin n whippin on stage Im fucked lost my control
my souls gone away ive been left outside in cold
these bitches won't seem to leave me ever alone
my mums a bitch she bitches and hates me loads
dunno what roads to take i keep on makin mistakes
im cursin at fakes makin der fuckin skeleton shake
I think im just fucked up ive done enough growin up
but still got dumb luck minds all gone fuzzy currupt
bitch better move cause im just about to errupt
don't wanna hear you so please shut the fuck up
people better feel me no ones a madder rapper
i'll jab sticks in ya abs and give ur ass a slappin
then your gettin jetted off covered up in rappin
cut the actin bitches i'll just slap ya for laghin


chorus
you always like to judge me
laughin and finding things funny
someday bitch you will pay
for makin such a bad mistake
my bodys is always hurtin
my fuel is now alight burnin


nobody is iller den me!

Effect 02-14-05 06:45 AM

can I have some feed back please......

Effect 02-14-05 04:32 PM

upping for feed plz.........

Effect 02-15-05 11:20 AM

upping............................

Da_Throwdest 02-15-05 11:30 AM

it'z a nice drop i like it but u need a betta chorus but it'z str8 leave ur feed on my open mic & return the favor in my 2 battles ight

.Judicial. 02-15-05 11:32 AM

sorry to be free postin but is you tryin 2 join da jury fam??

otha den dat it was a nice drop,structure looks good nice and neat
you got judge me in ur chorus....see you already got The Jury in you boy

Effect 02-15-05 12:31 PM

thanks I'm glad you like it....


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