A Must Read - "brutality" - Don't Sleep!!!!
 

TECKNICALITY WAS BORN INTO REALITY/
NO NEED FOR THA POLICE BRUTALITY/
IT'S MENTALLY AFFECTING/ THA POISON INJECTING/ LIKE THA KILLA BEEZ STING/ IT'S NOT IN THA EXECUTION/ BRAIN POLLUTION/ FIND THA SOLUTION/ FIND IT RELENTLESS/
SOMETHIN' ILL/ IT'S ALL IN THA SKILL/ ANOTHER CENTLESS APPRENTICE/ THA FUMES OF PAINT THAT CONSUMES/ FEEL DIZZY/ FEELIN' FAINT/ PUBLIC HEROS FULL O' COMPLAINTS/ WHAT I AM/ WHAT YOU AIN'T/ SUFFERING CRITISIZM/ NOT A MODEL CITIZEN/ LOUTSKIZM ON A "MAD BOMBIN' MISSION"/
PHLE ONE WITH THA CATACLYSM/ KEMS IS PERFECTING COLD FUSION/ AMONGST THA CONFUSION/ IS THA ILLUSION/ ABUSE IS AMUSIN'/ BUT CAN'T B ACCUSIN'/ GOT A WAR PLAN MORE DEADLY THAN HITLER'S/ IT WAS WRITTEN IN ANCIENT SCRIPTURES/ BLOOD FOR BLOOD/ THA UNITY THICKER THAN MUD/ GOIN TO WAR UNHEARD AND UNSEEN/ AWAKEN FROM YOUR DREAMS/ BY GUNSHOTS AND SCREAMS/ THA TRUTH MANIFESTED/ WOULD NEVER HAVE CONFESSED IT/ UNDER VERBAL ARREST/ ATACK CAN'T ATTEST IT/ THA DISEASE THAT INFECTS US/ THA SYSTEM THAT CORRECTS US/ 2 CANS O' MACE/ EMPTIED IN MY FACE/ POLICE BRUTALITY - FUCK THEIR MENTALITY!!!!!

A NIGGA ON HIS KNEES/ SHOTGUN TO HIS HEAD/ FO HIS LIFE HE PLEADS/ THINKIN' HE'LL SOON B DEAD/ A CARD UP HIS SLEEVES/ THA ACE O SPADES/ THINKS BOUT HIS LIFE/ AS IT BEGINS TO FADE/ WHO'LL SUPPORT HIS KIDS AND WIFE?/
POLICE BRUTALITY/ WHAT'S THEIR SPECIALITY?/ TO CORRECT US/ NOT TO PROTECTS US/

IT WAS THA INSPECTAH/ THA ONE THAT CARESSED HER/ HER RAPED HER IN THA STATION/ CRIMES GONE UNSEEN/ THEIR STORIES INFLATION/ 2 COVER UP CONSPIRACY/ SHE WAS ONLY A TEEN/ TOO EXPLICIT/ TOO OBSCENE/ THA SCREAMS FROM CELL BLOCK FIFTEEN/ THA NOISE DEFENING/ THA VOICES THREATENIN'/ IN NO-ONE SHE COULD COFIDE/ THA MENTAL SCARS SHE HIDES/ THA BRUISES ON HER SIDE - STIL BURN DEEP/ THA TEARS SHE CRIES ARE BITTER N' WARM/ HER MIND HAS BEEN TORN/ ABORTS THA CHILD UNBORN/ POLICE BRUTALITY/ SAY THEY PROTECT US/ THEY ONLY INFECT US/ MINDS, BODY AND SOUL/ WHO'S THA REAL CRIMINAL?/ THEY ACT LIKE ANIMALS/ THA SECRETS THEY HIDE - ONLY SEEN ON THA INSIDE/ A STORY NEVER TO BE TOLD/ HOW COULD ONE LIVE IN A WORLD SO COLD???????

the short bars made the flow a little choppy in my eyes i liked the topic good work there you stayed with it too. just up the flow that's all

i could only skim through this piece...as it was long - but more importantly, done in CAPS LOCK...and my eyes are fuked up at the moment...so from what i read...

was raw...a bit of a hard hitting reality piece...good 'flow'...a bit cynical...(which is good in my eyes, as long as it doesnt go over the top, ALL THE TIME)...overall...liked it...

..but lose he caps 'please'...so we can all read it easier and what not...respect...