Valentines Day Massacre [Love/Hate] ....RoughCopy
 

Aight, had an idea for a Valentines day Massacre Open mic, but in my own way, An emotional massacre, this is kinda deeper than what your used ta me rappin, so it may not turn out to be all that, but i thought i';d try...
its kinda split up into 3 diffrent emotions, each verse is a diffrent emotion


Verse 1: Love Or Hate? (Torn Between The Line)
February 14th, everybody in the mood for Affections..
Thin line between love n hate so lemme open the Elections..
Just another day for alotta people, so what you gonna Choose?
You could sit n remenisce about your ex an Lose...
Or you can heal ya wounds An take it like a Man....
Its an emotional race an ya being Outran...
No matter how fast you run, you just cant Keep-Up...
Chasing ya dreams but always comin Stuck...
You dont feel you got the Luck So you decide too Hate
Call her up an tell her ya doin Great....
Lying too yourself an her too, Tellin her everythin Alright...
When ya torn between what to do an she been cryin all-night...
So now ya actin a fool an you destoryed your chance....
All because you couldnt decide if this girl was your true romance...

Verse 2: Love (What if...?)
Its valentines day, an your in the Mood for Love...
Life couldnt be better cause ya gave Hate the Shove...
Ya celebratin 2 years Together..
Celebratin makin it thru any Weather....
Ya face lights up, as she gives you a Call...
...If love is what you choose, then you can have it All..
If you ever Fall, she'll be right by your Side..
Cause all the Odds that ever came your way were Defied....
Just 2 years ago you were thinkin about Suicide...
Til you met this girl Now you can Devide love n hate.....
You made the right choice so theres no telling what you Awate
You took the Gamble, had the Nuts an now you got the Lady..
Be sure you know what you can Handle, Cause you got the Guts, an she got you goin Crazy...
Ya hearts in 12 diffent places but they all belong too Her...
You sit back, let Love take its course an let the Neccesarry Occur...


Verse 3: Hate [The Reality]
Thought you'd play 'Hard to get' tell the girl you'll be Friends..
But then that all Depends....
Does she wanna sit n Wait?
Hopein one day You'll Love, but thats when you begin too Hate...
She got another man, an she claims shes Happy...
She still got Love for you, but as friends, so this what Happens..
You cuss n cuss, hopin she'll see her Senses...
But she hates you as much as you hate her so the Situation Tenses..
The heated Discussion becomes a Brutal Fight..
You reach back sn she grabs the first thing in Sight.....
So ya reaction is too do onto others as they do onto You...
An emotions take over as you beat her black n Blue....
A little scuffle turned into Bloody Murder....
So you sit n cry, an the neighbours Heard-Ya...
Police are on the Scene as she lied With Concussion..
Ya took things a step too far an didnt think about the Represcussion...
Police dont want a Discussion, is Murder of the 1st Degree...
An all because you chose hate they locked you up n threw away the Key..!

Strcuture maybe a little woah in places

It is just a rough copy, wanted ta see if people was feelin the idea....

Wanted ta see if i could actually move away from the battle rap an try somthin new, so uppin for feed

you are so gay.... writing a song about valentines day your corny as fuck.

Its not even about just that you idiot........

Its a story kinda thing

but i guess if you didnt read it, you aint gonna understand what its about, but aight, its a love story an corny, cause you know best..........
thats what i like about ya tho
Your attention too detail
Fuckass

Uppin for feed

sorry for beefing wid ya but I don't like lame shit that I read it don't appeal to me so im going to say something anywayz sorry your flow was aight in this peace the story was shit but hey u can't have everything can you please drop feed on my song please no hate though...

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