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"Mental Darkness"
it seems 2 b evathang i do, & evawhere i go
my good works & talents always seem 2 b unshown i get bad press wheneva i try 2 do sumthin good also i get stereotyped just cuz i'm a brotha from da hood so i just keep 2 myself & walk around wit my head down all day then people got da nerve 2 ask me, "Y I Bring Static 2 Those Who Look At Me Da Wrong Way" what can i say it'z in my blood & the way i was raised "White Society" dealt me a bad hand so i just play the cards i was gave this is not a feel pity 4 me joint it'z like not that at all just wanna let u know that whateva goes up is gonna fall so in this life i lead evaday is a test of living in monstrous this is just a short journey of going thru my "Mental Darkness" leave ur feedbacc & let me know what u think |
mayne c'mon all y'all i know seen diz here & read it, i can't get ne feedback on this dat'z fucced up uppin this 4 sum feedbacc
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im feelin this shit
like how everything has a nice even flow i like the vocab i like the subject that u talked about but u could of made it a lil longer but overall it is pretty good ill give it 8/10 return the favor link in sig holla baq |
I was def. feelin this shit man...loved the topic and you did a good job with it...Really feeling the bar "what can i say it'z in my blood & the way i was raised
"White Society" dealt me a bad hand so i just play the cards i was gave" Overall good shit man...Holla...1 |
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