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Dopeman vs Kordozar
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9 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 02-14-05 at 08:12 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 07:32 PM.
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Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 07:54 PM.
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Kid trynna win battles, but like a 3 leaf clover, he got ''No Luck''...
Cause his ''spits'' have speach impediments like 'Daffy Duck'... Wouldnt cause 'Havoc' even if he was 'Mobbin Deep' With 'Prodigy'.. Cant even Count Ta Three, Nevermind slang a 'MetaPhor'(four)... Callin me a homo? This herb is sexually unsure.... There wasnt even a ''lock'' on your ''closet''-door... You got the key, went too explore now ya know as the 'Anal-whore' An ya never even wanted ta battle me, you meant ta hit 'Decline'... Your fuckin 'Odd' n Dyslexic, ya wanted ''9 Lines''!!! Blah, just somthin quick If ya dont understand any of the verses, dont vote y'all Peace |
Comes On Rv Ta Argue With Girls Cus He Desires Sex...
His Rekord,Few More Battles His Losses Can Recieve Retirement Checks... His Wacc Verses Put Kids Ta Sleep Like A Bedtime Story... Blew Off Valor So Thass Why He Reps Tha Jury.... Left Him Mih Will And He Still Couldn't Buy A Win.. I Already "Shottaboy"Guess Dopeman Wants Ta Die Again.. Cumin On A Coin Iss Tha Onli Way You'll Skeet A Dyme.. Pussies Have 9 Lives,Im Takin 1 With Each Line... Make Him A Underground Mc When I Leave His Mic Next Ta A Tree Vine.. |
Pretty dope verse....
Ya got weaker as you went on, in my opinnon anyway... Feelin that retirement check line tho, pretty nice shit, whats ya alias? lol, an i didnt even realize you didnt call me a homo in that thread, my bad man |
Yea I Did Get Weaker I Wasn't Focused I Wass Doin Somethin But Mih Alias Wass Newkid.........
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
Comes On Rv Ta Argue With Girls Cus He Desires Sex...
His Rekord,Few More Battles His Losses Can Recieve Retirement Checks... Left Him Mih Will And He Still Couldn't Buy A Win.. I Already "Shottaboy"Guess Dopeman Wants Ta Die Again.. The only thing halfway decent in either verse.. Kordozar won. I just dont feel like breaking it down more.. |
Voted For: Kordozar
cool battle...but whut up with da 9 lines joint???...aneway Kid trynna win battles, but like a 3 leaf clover, he got ''No Luck''... Cause his ''spits'' have speach impediments like 'Daffy Duck'... ^^DECENT OPENER NOTHIN HARD..2ND LINE WAS WEAK Wouldnt cause 'Havoc' even if he was 'Mobbin Deep' With 'Prodigy'.. ^^^^^????? U SPIT DIS LINE 4 NO REASON... Cant even Count Ta Three, Nevermind slang a 'MetaPhor'(four)... Callin me a homo? This herb is sexually unsure.... ^^^1ST LINE WAS HOTT BUT DA 2ND DIDN'T DO NOTHIN There wasnt even a ''lock'' on your ''closet''-door... You got the key, went too explore now ya know as the 'Anal-whore' ^^^WEAK An ya never even wanted ta battle me, you meant ta hit 'Decline'... Your fuckin 'Odd' n Dyslexic, ya wanted ''9 Lines''!!! ^^^2ND LINE WAS HOTT WITH DA ODD/9 LINES... overall- i think dope verse was weak startin with ya ryhme scheme if u cant make more than 2 words in 1 bar ryhme u still a newb 2 me...but besides dat u didn't ahve any personal's so ya verse couldn't be goin at any1 nahmean Comes On Rv Ta Argue With Girls Cus He Desires Sex... His Rekord,Few More Battles His Losses Can Recieve Retirement Checks... ^^^^^^LMAOOO I DAT WAS HOTT..GOOD OPENER His Wacc Verses Put Kids Ta Sleep Like A Bedtime Story... Blew Off Valor So Thass Why He Reps Tha Jury.... ^^^COOL PERSONAL U COULD OF MADE HIT MORE HARDER Left Him Mih Will And He Still Couldn't Buy A Win.. I Already "Shottaboy"Guess Dopeman Wants Ta Die Again.. ^^^GOOD PERSONAL OFF HIS OLD NAME Cumin On A Coin Iss Tha Onli Way You'll Skeet A Dyme.. Pussies Have 9 Lives,Im Takin 1 With Each Line... Make Him A Underground Mc When I Leave His Mic Next Ta A Tree Vine.. ^^^^^DIS WHOLE SHIT WAS HOTT RITE..BUT DA 3 LINE SHIT FUKK UP YA FLOW overall-ya verse hott u had a couple hott personals which were also punches datz all u needed since he aint spit no personal's...verse had more creativity and it was more consistant...so datz y u get my vote RETURN DA FAVOR....MY BATTLE WITH CounTREEJAY |
This was feedback posted for Kordozar
check votes with my gay phrase still in my sig....
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
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Voted For: Kordozar
kordozar won this battle in my opinion. his punches were just hittin harder. kordozar had a better opener, his closer was kinda weak but made more sense than buckshots' did.also i was feelin kordozars flow more than buckshot. but buckshot had better structure and vocab was pretty much tied cuz both had good vocab. not really any multies to vote on kordozar had a pretty hot personal in there. so basically the deciding factor is punches which it usually is in all battles so im goin wit kordozar +++1++++ buckshot had better structure |
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