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Acidic 07-23-02 04:26 AM

dear friend
 
Dear Friend

even though my fucken life//
is becomin so damn trife//
ur fuckin wit a nigga tat has a liscence to kill all tha wifes//
im havin a barage of high-quality knifes//
bein sharpened to kill all tha friends of mine tat did me wrong//
tis is y i am writin tis god forasken song//
im havin all tha doors bein broke off tha hinges wit small clots of blood//
but tryin to be grimey i tried to cover it up wit mud//
i went diggin deep im talkin 6 feet deep//
cause wen i need to clean im doin a clean sweep//
i aint tryin to get caught so im headin to my niggas house//
im knockin on tha door and im greeted by his spouse//
havin a flash back to wen were little kids//
gettin food all ova our baby bibs//
ten getin placed to go to sleep in our cribs//
ten by a sudden snap of a finger//
i found my self beginin to linger//
around tha whole place and was greeted by a sound of little ones//
it was tha two of us arguin in tha past about who had tha bigger guns//
not talkin bout guns but actual muscles so take a time to reflect on tha past//
tis is tha final day i will let tis shit slide past me for tha last//
time i had enough so i pull tha glock out and unloaded a full clip in all of us there//
so were lyin there wit tha death stare//
guess wit tha arguin we had it had to end//
but tis was tha wrong way my dear friend//

Damani-DaGrinch 07-23-02 05:09 AM

nice spit and nice concept acidic.....
i was feelin dat shit but cuzz,,,
we gonna tear it up on dat crew colab...
have you figured yo shit out yet?

Acidic 07-23-02 05:11 AM

not even one damn line yet my mind has 3 callabs its workin on and i can only do 1 at a time

Damani-DaGrinch 07-23-02 05:43 AM

who else r u workin wit

Acidic 07-23-02 11:28 PM

yo damani im also workin wit Da NFamous and few others from ruffryders.com

LACK OF LOGIC 07-24-02 12:26 AM

AIGHT PA BUT TRY TO GET THAT ISH GOING AND DAMANI MY VERSE NEEDS TO GET SENT BUT I CANT SEND IT I WONDER IF I SHOULD POST IT THEN HAVE YOU GUYS POST UNDER TOGEATHER ...... BY THE WAY ACIDIC THIS WAS TIGHT PA YOU HAVE A VISION MUCH LIKE DAMANI FOR MUCH MORE THAT HIP HOP NEEDS AND DOESNT GET YOU CATS MAKE SURE YOU NURISH THAT

Acidic 07-24-02 01:12 AM

aight thanks for ur info man yo for ur verse place it in tha crew thread aight

LACK OF LOGIC 07-24-02 01:19 AM

aight ill do that but let me know when you done

Acidic 07-24-02 01:22 AM

ima be dun wit tomarrow for sure

Acidic 07-24-02 01:23 AM

uppin tis

Damani-DaGrinch 07-24-02 03:35 AM

thanx fo tha love LOL....... you could put it in tha crew thread or you could just send it to me at damanidagrinch@hotmail.com

sunshine 07-24-02 03:54 AM

yo acidic tight piece you just need to take time and add more word play metaphors similes and vocab but besides that the flow was great ~1'

Acidic 07-24-02 03:56 AM

uppin for more thoughts

Acidic 07-24-02 03:52 PM

uppin


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