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Killer Bee vs Technical
Battle Rules:
Ten Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 02-17-05 at 09:23 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Killer Bee has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 09:26 PM.
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are you gonna accept this shit. c'mon on now techni
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Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 10:20 PM.
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yo imma spit in a few homeboi im kinda busy right now so most likely imma spit tomorrow good luck on your vesre man...judgin from your past battles good knows you'll need it |
hey check out my battle against kester. the second one is what i meant to post. i think that spit is pretty decent for only a 2 line battle
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how didnt i follow the rules against kester? how has he when he hasn't gone yet
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yes he did go and stop spammin the thread and write ur verse
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so you claim the brick city, you got game as an icon, but you ain't 50...
game from compton, you from brick, im west side stompin and you still ridin my dick... homie i dont play dat, i spray crazy with my gat, fuck around with me and get yo face cracked... ill have you lookin like k. west, face full of imflamation, u go and see the doc but he don't examine a black patient... i ain't racist, but i still sport a confederate flag, come to my hood, it will be like iraq, you in a body bag... you a fag, i battle and tone on kester, you still give that bitch your vote, go play with his balls you fuckin child molester... your name technical, but your lyrics are boring and plain, im bout to pull a meth and bring the motherfuckin pain... i slain ya name, this about to be the brick city massacre, you have no game, i fucked your bitch and all you could say was dammit her... you battle Spul and all you can talk about is a baby pic, well pull down your pants, i bet you have a baby dick... technical, you suck at life, you should just quit, no one will miss you, i bet your mom wont even give a shit... |
Look Hit Delete...Cuz Your Verse Would Get Defeated With Skriptless Sheets N'...
Homie Makes Honey...How Ironic Cuz All Ur Productions Been Eatin... Check Bee...Test Me?...And You'll Lack Vital Body Parts Like Organ Donors... I Wanted To Farther You...But I Just Found Out Kester Already "Owned Ya"... Went Through Your Background...Thought You Was Asian Till I Flipped The Page N'... I Saw The Information...That This "Killer" Was Part Of A Crew That's Caucasion... Look See...I Murk Thee That Disrespect Me...Especially Since You Look For "Burnt Seeds"... West West Is Where Ya From?..Coulda Sworn It Was Brooklyn The Way I "Queen" This "Bee"... Take Excerpts Of My Rhymes Twerp...You Only Have Steamin Flows When Ya Minds Burnt... And I Feel Like Kobe...When I Say "You Could Ask The Otha "Twenty-Three (23) I Murked"...* The Jury Shall Rest Ya Case!..Lol ******** Kobe scored 55 points on jordan...number 23 and did a damage on lebron..number 23...oooo |
Voted For: Technical
Check Bee...Test Me?...And You'll Lack Vital Body Parts Like Organ Donors... I Wanted To Farther You...But I Just Found Out Kester Already "Owned Ya"... Went Through Your Background...Thought You Was Asian Till I Flipped The Page N'... I Saw The Information...That This "Killer" Was Part Of A Crew That's Caucasion... vs. nothing. Killer Bee, you need to work on your concepts and punches. You didn't have any hard hitting punches that were directed at your opponent. Your structure and flow is off, you should probably work on that before even worrying about creativity and punches. Also, work on your wording.. keep writing though. Technical, your verse was decent. There wasn't anything that really stood out as being great, but you had a couple of personals which I quoted. Your flow and structure was solid and consistent, and you had a couple alright concepts. Overall, you just came a lot harder and cleaner in this battle than your opponent did. v/ Technical |
This was feedback posted for Technical
checkin tha polls...both verses are good...wish i could vote
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^^^coo thanks for the honestly....uppin for more votes
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Voted For: Technical
Tehnicals verse was much more complex... Hard hittin punches, decent wordplay, nice vocab an flow, structure was easy too read an made the verse just flow along with eaze, by far the better verse... Bee, ya flow was too choppy in places, a little stretched too, learn to get too the point quicker iwith ya lines too, an your punches will have more effect, feel me? Straight drop from both Tech gets my vote tho Return the fave if ya see any of my battles or open mics floatin around Peace |
aite coo lets go yo....uppin for more votes....^^^^^^^^^^
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