Just a quick freestyle
 

lol tell i dont do wat im pose to do here at work lol yea dis is pretty gay but i was bored had to put something together...here ya go

ayo...

its like a negro spiritual we walking hand and hand/
black power hand to the man, house slaves infiltrating the Klan//

there we stand shook, this is not a black and white thing/
csue I know dudes pure as cane still living on public housing//

don't think cause it started off as a Martin Luther King thing/
that I was misuse or abuse the cause of the suffage I've seen//

I know my life's not ideal to most living good, I live to hustle/
but i've done all I could to learn from the hood, embraced the struggle//

complete with enough war scars to cover my cold heart/
still a whole heart cause I won't let anyone close enough to take it apart//

the streets provoking me, this heavenly art is controlling me/
narcs sitting outside scooping me, hopefully no one's mouth is opening//

I've seen God and Devil drinking cappuccinos outside of starbucks/
I walked over and they was like damn homie I guess we both needed to wake up//

the Devil looked like a women in the face with bad make up/
God was like I made the people who invented coffee and told the Devil to pay up//

I'm walking slow like what the fuck, admiring the Devil pimp cup gleaming/
God arose from the depts of his chair, then I realized I was dreaming//

I woke up screaming, thinking cot damn I had to see it to believe it/
the moral of the story is never think about drinking coffee while pursuing demons//

quick keystyle

*house slaves were alot lighter than all the other slaves thus they could have
passed as a white person to get into the Klan
everything else is very explanitory

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177218

the streets provoking me, this heavenly art is controlling me/
narcs sitting outside scooping me, hopefully no one's mouth is opening-that was an ill line,but tha rest was cool...I like tha subject of what ur verse was speaking on..hey youngn you got the mind of a Young CHUCK D!! holla hope ta here more from yah !!

For a quick freestyle this is nice girl. Found good balance with your vocab, had your flow on lock and structure was cool. Good imagery here and there, loved the way you started with it and how it progressed. Content was good, nice going girl. Keep it up!

DQ

thanx fo da feed girl i appreciate it....uppin dis shit

Your female?

It was straight tho, Decent in parts, but basic in others, keep elevating, an doin ya thing

Peace

yea im a female i mean last time i checked i was...lol but yea thanx fo da feed.....uppin dis shit