Raw Proof vs Da_Throwdest
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-18-05 at 02:10 PM

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Raw Proof has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-15-05 02:11 PM.

time to get nasty on this shit, here we go.

two knocks bust down doors, cus Im a raw enemy/
Lay ur skull on the floor, just to make u 2 steps a head of me/
U dont got the heveanly energy to get the best of me/
so cough ur blood and go battle Sdizzle instead of me/
Im mix wit so many rapstyles its like Iv been spitting since the 70s/
I'll make it burn like chemistry, then drop kick ur computer screen/
spill unleaded gasoline on ur acid jeans then whach u scream/
u better have ur team vote ASAP in this bitch befor I smash ur dreams/
If I sliced 'MYSELF' in half, U still couldnt be half as mean/
I'll enter ur blood stream and travle just to get on ur nerves/
give u lacsative cus my adjectives just crushed ur verbs/
cus I pleed the 5th when I leave u wit bleeding ribs/
got U needing kits to re-stich ur bleeding lips/
so would somebody tell deepthrought that Im one of them mean rappers/
atleast befor the rest of his spleans shatters, from his stomech all the way to his keen bladder/

ok, its over for my part, uppin for a verse from the da throwdest

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Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-15-05 04:42 PM.

come on bitch, how u gonna battle this grammatical cannibal
it'z understandable 2 b scared cuz i eat emcees like an animal

i'ma pop off ya top & rip u apart, just call me cannable hannibal
i spit the unimagineable & my flow is hectic, it'z unmanageable

how u gonna battle me when ur name "Raw Proof" doesn't make ne sense
u gargle & recycle ur style more then "Scope" mouthrinse

look i've already killed ur shit & i'm on my 7th line
but i'll b kind & finish this shit, spit dynamite & explode ur mind

i'm glad ur sig doesn't say lyrically blessed, but 2 me it'z obvious that ur mentally messed
ur no contest, & ur about 2 get fucked this i must confess

but not by me cuz i'm an "Atheist" & i need no reconciliation
i'd make u get raped by a priest just 2 give u sum inspiration

cuz basically ur boring as hell & u've done nothin' worth knowing
u even driving me crazy, wit ya going nowhere an nothin' worth showing

looks like i tore u apart, limb from limb, ya lyrical ability is all ova the floor
ya flow is in the cupboard, wordplay in the back & ya punches still left in the door

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

this battle wasnt reall tight, it was ok.
basically yall both need to up ya punches cuz half of them didnt hit or made sense at all.
structure is fine.
bars r stretched for no reason, especially da throwes.
he had better multies tho. Raw proof had better flow but it could've been better.
but da throwest punches hit better between the two of yall in my opinion. theones that actually made sense hit harder than Raw proofs.
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ight fam i appreciate da constructive criticism & ur vote c'mon people vote i'm uppin this

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

i think da_throwdest won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
raw proof u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were pretty good

favorite da_throwdest lines:
how u gonna battle me when ur name "Raw Proof" doesn't make ne sense
u gargle & recycle ur style more then "Scope" mouthrinse

look i've already killed ur shit & i'm on my 7th line
but i'll b kind & finish this shit, spit dynamite & explode ur mind

i'm glad ur sig doesn't say lyrically blessed, but 2 me it'z obvious that ur mentally messed
ur no contest, & ur about 2 get fucked this i must confess

but not by me cuz i'm an "Atheist" & i need no reconciliation
i'd make u get raped by a priest just 2 give u sum inspiration

favorite raw proof lines:
Im mix wit so many rapstyles its like Iv been spitting since the 70s/
I'll make it burn like chemistry, then drop kick ur computer screen/
spill unleaded gasoline on ur acid jeans then whach u scream/
u better have ur team vote ASAP in this bitch befor I smash ur dreams/
If I sliced 'MYSELF' in half, U still couldnt be half as mean/
I'll enter ur blood stream and travle just to get on ur nerves/
give u lacsative cus my adjectives just crushed ur verbs/

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

tight battle, but think da throwdest took it easily
punches - da throw
personals - da throw
multis - tie
flow/structure - tie
complexity/creativity - da throw
vocab - da throw

verse wasnt bad raw, but da throw just came out harder and hit harder with punches and personals, his verse was solid....but da throw, it was a little hard to read in a couple places....but overall, pretty solid spit, nice job

This was feedback posted for Da_Throwdest
 

I Am Gouing With Da Throwdest, He Had Some Shit That Was Funny, Bigz To Both But His Shit Was Funny

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

aiight raw,
your shit was pretty nice. Yo flow was alright not the best. You had some ok punches, nothing special. I was feelin' some of them. Some real nice ones. Your structure was pretty nice too. Just lose the "/" makes it look herbish. But overall a pretty nice verse, man. props 8/10

Da throw,
you had a nice verse. Your flow was on in this. Your structure was ok. Closer I loved. tight shit. Yo punches kept on hitting too. Real nice job. 8.5/10

I think this was real close battle. Both of y'all gonna be good in the future so keep practicing. nice job.
but vote/ Da throw

plz RTF nobody does it anymore, but please do it.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178050

This was feedback posted for Da_Throwdest
 

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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

thorwdest took this one with fan fuckin tastic vocab damn kid u hot metas were ight punches hit hard and direct right to the point...structre was good nice multis flow was good too...

7.5/10