good shyt 4 off da head. dis one was good too. keep droppin get ready 4 my new piece coming to a thread near you lol j/p
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Sup Varentao..
I had to sit for a minute and think about how I wanted to reply to this piece..Its evident that it goes a lot deeper for you personally than any of us reading it could understand..But its easy to take the lines and morph them into lines that interpret your own scenario, whatever it may be..and just relate to the emotions presented and truly feel it..
I think youre a very talented writer and im never disappointed when i read anything of yours..Your concepts range in wide variety but every piece has the same illness, imagery, and ability to grab hold of its reader..
Feelin this. Keep on and keep blessin us.
peace n propz.

yeah...thats why its so damn hard to talk about this...cos its too deep and well...painful...to 'depict' it or write about it with any kind of real structure or whatever...

anyway..appreciate the comments....and you too synickle...

OKAY OKAY so this reply is not really gonna be on your poem........but least its a reply

part of the journey so incredible, a story must be made of it..

^ thats it we GOING ON A JOURNEY you done two now and im dissappointed yo ukeep talkin about a journey but have i seen or ben on it yet?........NO you holdin out on me dar?>..........huh.........cuz if you is ima get mean yano.......il lbring a shovel some clean undies.....food.....(granola) soy.....hmmmmmmmm a stick.........maybe a flashlight......eww you think we migh tsee some banshees?......thatd be tight........yea.........well enough of this jsut trying to bring in some huomour beautiful poem swetheart

Dont see this sorta ish from u often,
... luv ish iz wha i mean ...
Diggin it ...
I know how hard it is to write bout things like
dis but its good to get ur emotions out & the
best way to is written them down or talkin bout em,
Much props,

RESPECT!!! :D

~1~

my fellow poet/
this was an more than well felt piece/
pure truth from the heart/
outstanding/
preach on & in time the pain will heal/
muchluv&respect

heh@shaynea....hmm...well i'll have to get back to ya...but the next journey might be to the depths of fiery, gravelly hell., fighting demons, evading acid etc. etc.

Still up for the journey? (!!!)...

Well thanks for the comments....and same to Blackmoon and Dimeond...not the best piece i done...but as i said...find it hard to write about this ish...its a bit 'too much'..anyway..its all good..respect..