Recieve me
 

Receive Me
Time keeps moving for me
ever turning pages
if time heals every wound
explain my ceaseless rages
i smile and clench my fists
count ten while deeply breathing
i don't think it's working
Constantly i'm seething
Can't wait till someone tries it
hurting me i mean
can't wait to finally feel it
my rage i've never seen
i welcome any asshole
who suffers foot in mouth
i breathlessly anticipate
any chance to shout
i'm itching for the chance
to make somebody pay
last nite it was my mother
it might be you today
so while you're being stupid
playing lord and master
i am laughing at you
i move and think much faster
give me one chance to prove it
just one fucking excuse
to demonstrate my anger
to let the demon loose


im highly pissed right now so thats where this came from

Can't wait till someone tries it
hurting me i mean
can't wait to finally feel it
my rage i've never seen
.....
give me one chance to prove it
just one fucking excuse
to demonstrate my anger
to let the demon loose

Damn gyrl, you should get pissed more often..:D
Seriously tho..I feel ya on this one..Sometimes you just need to release all that fury..on some unsuspecting victim..Who thinks they can get away with being an asshole one more time..Jus let em know Hazy baby..
Anyway..I already told you you got the skills to pay the bills, buy a couple caddillacs, a yacht or two..Youre mad talented and you always deliver powerful pieces no matter what the topic may be..Feelin this..stay up.
Peace.

-Hit me up bout the collab whenever, the topic you wanted to do before is fine if you still wanna do it, just refresh my memory..or somethin new, whatev, just hit me so we can do that..when ya calm down that is..peace gyrl.

Thats when you get your best pieces either when you pissed as fuck or happy as fuck

yea^ thanks for hte heartfelt reply.........and muah to gege........sent you an email about the collab.....and the reply is much appreciate

this was ill, i liked this, flow and stuff were in it, much props for the emotion growin' from your anger... nice


peace

"i welcome any asshole
who suffers foot in mouth
i breathlessly anticipate
any chance to shout"

^^ lol, had me laughin a lil bit.. ..nice pice though ma, most talent comes out when peeps feel a lot of emotion at one time.. ..

"Can't wait till someone tries it
hurting me i mean
can't wait to finally feel it
my rage i've never seen"

^^ i like.. ..what got you that pissed though??

"i am laughing at you
i move and think much faster
give me one chance to prove it
just one fucking excuse
to demonstrate my anger"

^^ my favorite part, demonstrated some of tha thing i think when i'm hella mad.. ..nice work, keep writin


¤DoS¤

muah gracias

nice sig by the wy i understand most of it

lol

damn...i feel you on this for sure...very raw and full of pure and powerful emotions...

..this is what i call a 'venting' piece executed so damn well...like a fighter filled with anger, but unleashing it with technique and intelligence...



...but also in a way it was kind of deep....like "can't wait to feel it, the rage i've never seen"....tells something more than just the anger you feel...but what type of person you are....and maybe that something very very bad has happened to finally push you over (or at least very near) the edge....and now looking to get it all out...cos its eating away at you inside....(!?!?!)...well that was some of what i got out of it..

...respect..

Release ... it .... Release ...

** Calm Music Plays **
Breath ... ahh thats it in & out ... lol

Tight ish gurl ...
I can relate 100% ... i always
get sudden bursts of anger ... more
often then some ... lmao its good fo` rhymes
but not fo` peeps around!

Props
Respect
~1~

uppin for lady lazy hazy...(nah only kidding, just rhymed tis all!!!)...

YO MA SHYT WASS HOTT KEEP POSTIN. NUFF SAID. 1LUV PEACE OUT