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nitrogen diss track
nitrogen battle diss"clik this bitch to hear it"
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hmm had to turn everything up cause its low compared to other recordings... maibe save ur final mixdown a lil louder but anyway...
nice flow, some pretty nice punches... shit wasn't bad at all dawg~ , keep dropping and up your emotion 1 |
uppin........................................ :shoot:
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yea i saw both of your verses and i think this one was better. you have much better presence, much better quality, all around it was a better verse. your second verse i thought was better than the first- solid joint.
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Typing as I listen: Rhymescheme is up and down. Hot some places, bland and 1-syl other times. Flow was somewhat basic and could have used more variance. Beat BLEW in my opinion. Could easily tell it was a net beat. Track was ehh ok. Not bad, but not great. As a diss track, if this were aimed at me I wouldn't be bothered or irritated about it to be honest. I think a more aggressive beat and some aggression in your deliv would have brought this up as a diss track.
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Listening to it right now.......the flow was nice...and the presense was there..it woulda been nicer if you woulda dissed him on stuff he did at this site...but overall it was nice.....liked ya metas and what i heard hit hard but it woulda hit harda with real personals..thats a diss track...but it was good..dont get me wrong... overall 7.5/10 |
uppin for more feed ,thanks to all that responded
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listening......
OoOo...my typa beat...lmao at the tag on it....ghetto fucka.... Hot flow.....Us boston cats jus know how to do it.... One of the few people I actually enjoy listenin to on the internet..... an maybe like 1 of 2 people I like listenin to on RV.... Lets Remix this with sum people to diss....I could defintly roll off ur flow.... 9/10.... wow....jet gave a good rating.... guess what kids.....IT WAS GOOD. |
Beat/Production: Aight..beat was pretty hot. Nice choice for a battle diss. Lyrics: The lyrics weren't decent, I liked how you were spitting the punches, instead of these other cats talkin about using gats in battle verses. Nice. Flow: Flow was good, basic ryhme scheme, but you know what that suits you and doesn't sound bad. Decent. Delivery: Delivery wasn't bad, seemed a lil laid back in all...but I laughed at the line about the pussy feedback line. The second verse had a little more delievery to it though. Quality: Quality wasn't too bad, but you sound like your echoing really bad. Makes you sound like your rapping in a hallway, neways...kinda affects the sound, but not bad. Overall: Overall this was a good battle track, the lyrics for this track were good and was a relief from all them fake thugz who spit about gangster shit instead of metaphors and linquistics when fucking up an emcee lyrically. 8/10 Hit Me Up For Collab....AIM: Yo Phuh Q Also Leave Feedback On My Song "Verbal Suicide" ~R~ |
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