TheWackestMC vs Invektive
 

Battle Rules:

Crew Battle: The Establishment vs Nok Out Kingz

10-14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding
No Bullshit

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-19-05 at 11:18 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 06:11 PM.

this internet thug sais he's "phat"....but please stop actin hard chubbs
ill run more laps around the wackest...than that guy in your avatar does
your skills are deflating every time you battle...so sit back and notice how
ima Establish a win....you said it yourself ....NOK truly is whats goin down
all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
Ko'ed by the only 2 decent heads you battled..and you think you still hot..why?
faggot..you could drink a Red Bull..just to give you wings...your still not fly
im your psychiatrist..thank me for the lyrical clinic lettin u know that u soft
and this faggot could never see female skin...even if HIS clothing was lost
you havent gotten better since you started...dont elevate..your shit falls
if i said you was nice...i'd contradict myself...cause your name sais it all

TheWackestMC has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 04:40 PM.

chea, chea, NOK IS IN THE BUILDING

he makin threats in his raps as if he'll do em
but you got transparent bars we all see right thru em
n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
but you'll see him scream, when i wring his throat
im not cinnamon crunch but i bring the toast
so when ya team approach,u know i keep the neeners close
and that flow so dead a paramedic couldnt even see the pulse
i spit fire, yall mind will melt
rappin on pool tables, the only time ya rhymes r "felt"
u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
supersoakers is the only time u squirtin at a car
u a drink servin nigga, KEEP WORKIN AT YA BARS!!....holla

++++++++++++++++uppin for honest feed++++++++++
reall good battle yall, dont sleep on it

uppin for the win.........................................

++++++++++++++++uppin for honest feed++++++++++
reall good battle yall, dont sleep on it
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This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

checkin polls nice verse tho............................

Voted For: Invektive

wow, this one was good...

Invektive man, SWEET drop.....
>this internet thug sais he's "phat"....but please stop actin hard chubbs
ill run more laps around the wackest...than that guy in your avatar does
-first line coulda been better, 2nd was nice 8/10
>your skills are deflating every time you battle...so sit back and notice how
ima Establish a win....you said it yourself ....NOK truly is whats goin down
-nice play on that link....8/10
>all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
-this line i liked, laughed, 8/10
>kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
-meh, okay line. wanst feelin it too much 6.5/10
>Ko'ed by the only 2 decent heads you battled..and you think you still hot..why?
faggot..you could drink a Red Bull..just to give you wings...your still not fly
-nice puch....8/10
>im your psychiatrist..thank me for the lyrical clinic lettin u know that u soft
and this faggot could never see female skin...even if HIS clothing was lost
-haha, another nice one....8/10
>you havent gotten better since you started...dont elevate..your shit falls
if i said you was nice...i'd contradict myself...cause your name sais it all
-solid closer to a solid verse 8.5/10

overall: 55/70.....nice drop man, came way harder...punches and personals were way more effective, got right to the point, no wasted lines at all.....flow was great, vocab, average....but overall, you killed in this one man, best verse ive seen by you man

Whackest MC....i dunno man, verse looked a little lacking, for a crew battle
>he makin threats in his raps as if he'll do em
but you got transparent bars we all see right thru em
-not really sayin anythin here.....6/10
>n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
-again, not even 'punchin' him here....5/10
>but you'll see him scream, when i wring his throat
im not cinnamon crunch but i bring the toast
-hahaha, nice bar here, second line, creative 8/10
>so when ya team approach,u know i keep the neeners close
and that flow so dead a paramedic couldnt even see the pulse
-this bar is useless...if hes dead, he has no pulse.....5/10
>i spit fire, yall mind will melt
rappin on pool tables, the only time ya rhymes r "felt"
-not bad.....6/10
>u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
-got better near the end here....8/10
>supersoakers is the only time u squirtin at a car
u a drink servin nigga, KEEP WORKIN AT YA BARS!!....holla
-weak closer....6/10

overall: 44/70

v/invektive....for hardre punches/personals....complexity, pretty much every catagory, he took this one by far, whackest didnt really come too hard in this one

Crew vote removed

word......thanks for the votes......uppin for more...............

wow this is crazy, lol uppin for votes++++++++++++++++++++++

This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

Checking the polls on this. In my opinion Invektive owned this guy.

This was feedback posted for TheWackestMC
 

checkin' the polls, both raps are good, but he got good personals

how is it crazy? my verse was just a lot better than yours....i had better personals, metaphors, punches, structure......how is this crazy?