Buck.Shot vs .K.onfliktz
 

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Check in by: 02-17-05 at 05:12 PM

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.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 04:14 PM.

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 04:23 PM.

Kid Wants ta be famous, thinks he gonna make it in the Game
He's 'Established' on the site, or at least that what he Claim
The boys just ''Addicted'' an tried ta hide it by makin Threads
Flows bout as ''Phat'' as an anorexic baby not gettin Fed
I'm the one u ''dread'' an i repp the jury, not a 'Judge'
Trynna be gangster but the only thing he ''packin'' is the Fudge
I aint one to hold a Grudge especially against those who think i'm Ill
Rememeber the your own crew an you signed me for my Skill?
So dont even front or even try sayin i'ma Herb
i'll expose you an tell everybody how u grew up in the Suburbs
Oops, i just did, now the kids gon' flip his Lid
Cuse his Thug image was his only reazon ta for him ta Live!

Blah, it was just sumthin' quick, lol typed it in 7 minutes, good luck Kon, an no hate, its all love n rhymes

New Name "Buck.Shot" Cause He Realized he couldn't be dope man..
When Everything You Drop Is "Bad"..........You Need a Pope, Man....

Spittin Jarassic-shit..Equipped With Acid-Spits..Attackin-kidz..
Almost 20 and still breast feedin'...Only Problem Iz,
...........It's His BoyFriend That's Attached-Ta-Tits..

Fuck Handin em "bucks"..Kon'll Just Skip To The Point.. (buck "."shot)
Twizt Ya Armz Around..Eyes blood"shot"..jea he pulled a "double joint..

New Name "Buck.Shot" Cause He Realized he couldn't be dope man..
When Everything You Drop Is "Bad"..........You Need a Pope, Man....

Spittin Jarassic-shit..Equipped With Acid-Spits..Attackin-kidz..
Almost 20 and still breast feedin'...Only Problem Iz,
...........It's His BoyFriend That's Attached-Ta-Tits..

Fuck Handin em "bucks"..Kon'll Just Skip To The Point.. (buck"."shot)
Twizt Ya Armz Around..Eyes blood"shot"..jea he pulled a "double joint"..

Knock ya "Light-bulb" Out..so the boogeyman gets u wen its bedtime
Fuck newspapers, Stamp ya skull with my Bars and give ya "headlines"

Kids Laugh At Ya "Bangerz"..Here..ill give u a "Knock Knock Joke" :banghead:
How Many Mili Seconds duz it take for this Knock Off..ta Choke..

New Name "Buck.Shot" Cause He Realized he couldn't be dope man..
When Everything You Drop Is "Bad"..........You Need a Pope, Man....

Spittin Jarassic-shit..Equipped With Acid-Spits..Attackin-kidz..
Almost 20 and still breast feedin'...Only Problem Iz,
...........It's His BoyFriend That's Attached-Ta-Tits..

Fuck Handin em "bucks"..Kon'll Just Skip To The Point.. (buck"."shot)
Twizt Ya Armz Around..Eyes blood"shot"..jea he pulled a "double joint"..

Knock ya "Light-bulb" Out..so the boogeyman gets u wen its bedtime
Fuck newspapers, Stamp ya skull with my Bars and give ya "headlines"

Kids Laugh At Ya "Bangerz"..Here..ill give u a "Knock Knock Joke" :banghead:
How Many Mili Seconds duz it take for this Knock Off..ta Choke..

Knock ya "Light-bulb" Out..so the boogeyman gets u wen its bedtime
means ill knock his Lights out..his brain out wat eva

New Name "Buck.Shot" Cause He Realized he couldn't be dope man..
his name before was dope man

Fuck Handin em "bucks"..Kon'll Just Skip To The Point.. (buck "."shot)
theres a point in the middle of his name

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

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Voted For: Buck.Shot


Buck.Shot
Alright Nice Verse Kid, You Cam Hard With Some Punches In Here Most Was Creatively Done, You Had Well Vocabulary In Here, But On The Other Hand Some Was Basic, Your Structure Could Use Some Work Here, Try To Line Up The Bars So That They Are Even Or Almost Even As Possible, Also Could Add Some Multi's Here It'll Do Your Verse Better In One Hand, Meta's Wasn't Really Here You Can Improve On That Category Other Then That....8/10

.K.onflickz
Wow, This Is The Worse I Saw From You So Far, I Mean Your Structure Was Absolutely Chaotic, Your Vocabulary Was A Two Year Olds Book, Your Punches Wasn't Even There, Damn Coz What Happen???, You Had No Decent Meta's In This Verse, Your WHole Flow Was Off, Your Structure Was The Worse Part Of It, You Had Multi's In Here Which Is The Only Category You Would Of Won, But Other Then That, Your Punches Was Soft Hitting And Your Personals Wasn't Hitting To Hard......Over All 7/10

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An nope it aint a crew battle. i just pm'd him cause i wanted ta battle

word to that....thaz sum bullshit though...i did the structure on purpose...might want to read the fuckin explanations before u talk shit homo :)

Uppin y'all...........................................