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Sik Wit It 02-18-05 04:44 PM

lyricalflowz vs Skriptz
 
Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-20-05 at 04:44 PM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.

System 02-18-05 06:14 PM

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 06:14 PM.

Sik Wit It 02-18-05 06:33 PM

Ayo…
Look kid, only time you would win, would won the lot. & got cash*
…You have no skillz, since you already told me that you're trash
Only time when your punches are runnin, is when they were flee
…………Get off 2Pac’s dick. cuz, you’re just a fake-ass wannabe*
……I’m going to win this battle, so let’s get this shit out the way
My punches will smoke you like cigs. and be put in the ash tray*
Let me just tell you this, you’re finished before I even begin
…& You can tryout for a herb crew, and you’ll never get in
Looks like your already in one, but I guess you’re the one to blame*
………Your chance of winning here, is wacker than your username

Key’d


*Lot = lottery
*He has 2 battles where he keeps saying 2Pac
*Cigs = cigarettes (for you slow people)
*He’s in The Jury

Understand my verse, or don’t vote then…

System 02-18-05 06:37 PM

lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 06:37 PM.

....Gone.... 02-18-05 06:58 PM

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 
Nice Punches Lyrical Flow.


Good Drop From Both Heads


Checking The Polls

Sik Wit It 02-18-05 07:03 PM

word...im tired now...headache all day...uppin this

Ma$fit 02-18-05 09:02 PM

Voted For: Skriptz

im votin only based on openin bars cuz im lazy...f/i

Skripz aint a star, I spit 'unique' like it was written on mars
You'll only bless the mic, if you take advice from your avatar*
I'll rob ya jewelry, guess ya can say i stole your shine
Havin 'more letters' is the only way ya name is 'bigger' than mine
^^^^dem was cold openin bars but tha avy lined seemed too wordy to me



Look kid, only time you would win, would won the lot. & got cash*
…You have no skillz, since you already told me that you're trash
Only time when your punches are runnin, is when they were flee
…………Get off 2Pac’s dick. cuz, you’re just a fake-ass wannabe*
^^^dem was better bars right there...more punches wit urs too skrips...good shit dawg

my vote is for skripts cuz he had more punches PERIOD

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Black Queen 02-18-05 10:29 PM

Voted For: Skriptz

my vote goes to skriptz cus it waz more creative and it waz funnier his punches hit harder and he had a good flow nice structure vocab cud use sum work
Lyricalflowz- structure was good punches were decent cuda hit harder den wat dey did doe

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

godfather 02-18-05 10:38 PM

Voted For: Skriptz

i think skiptz won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
lyricalflowz u had good structure
u need a some work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were pretty good

favorite skriptz lines:
Only time when your punches are runnin, is when they were flee
…………Get off 2Pac’s dick. cuz, you’re just a fake-ass wannabe*
……I’m going to win this battle, so let’s get this shit out the way
My punches will smoke you like cigs. and be put in the ash tray*
Let me just tell you this, you’re finished before I even begin
…& You can tryout for a herb crew, and you’ll never get in

favorite lyricalflowz lines:
Skripz aint a star, I spit 'unique' like it was written on mars
You'll only bless the mic, if you take advice from your avatar*
I'll rob ya jewelry, guess ya can say i stole your shine
Havin 'more letters' is the only way ya name is 'bigger' than mine
Ask peeps if they heard of skriptz they'll all say No!
Only one accomplishment, and even that was a long time ago**
return tha favor
link in sig
thx

Kordozar 02-19-05 12:50 AM

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 
Polls..........................

Adam 02-19-05 10:50 AM

Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz - Allright, this was a good verse. Nice solid structure that flowed great. The punches were solid, hit hard and were funny as shit. Good personals too. You came pretty good in this battle. My favourtie line was...

Only time when your punches are runnin, is when they were flee
…………Get off 2Pac’s dick. cuz, you’re just a fake-ass wannabe*

^ Yep, good shit. Nice verse...7.5/10

lyricalflowz - Good verse as well. You also had a solid structure with good flow. The punches were there and connected allright. Not as hard as Skriptz though. You didn't have as many personals as him either. Don't get me wrong your verse was good just really played. Seen the closer used by Socrates before...and the punches thing has been used countless amounts of times. Your verse...6/10

Vote: Skriptz

Sik Wit It 02-19-05 06:39 PM

lol @ red bull...thanks uppin

M-Eazy 02-19-05 06:58 PM

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 
i think LF got this one, but it was close...but i aint guna vote on this, cause me and skriptz got history...


good drop both yall...was feelin em both, it would be a hard decision anyway

L.E 02-19-05 08:26 PM

Voted For: Skriptz

A'ight in all honesty this was a close battle...both came dope wit some nice punches and personals.

Lyrifcalflow...you need to work on flow and structure. Alot of your punches are elementary, your vocabulary is weak, and you need somethin a bit more creative. I liked how you included his avater, that was pretty good, but just keep workin at it, and you will be dope.

Skriptz...not the best I have seen from you, but still dope. Flow and structure is on point, and you came wit some witty punches and personals. Close battle...but Skriptz takes it. No hate, return the favor links in sig.

Sik Wit It 02-20-05 04:01 PM

omg...mayn...opening..shit...


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