Black History dedication PEEP IT
 

This is my dedicationt to the voices of the past generations
Not just black but to abe who signed our proclamation
to the white man who taught douglas how to read
to Rosa for not gettin her ass out of dat seat
mistreated and beated but we stood strong,its what we needed
but not to the people who wanted our race completely deleted
but we live now to tell the stories of the past
my dedication,cuz wit out dem we wouldnt have last
the whitemen used to take advantage of our black meats
flipped da script, now we get da vanilla flavored treats
but not all was bad but not good was all
sum of dem helped us when we started to fall
to this is a dedication to EVERYONE who put in good work
now its all betta but for them my heart still does hurt........

Concept is good once again and the way you approached it was very nice. Short but powerful drop here. Liked how you approached it from different angels, thanking everyone and not just black but also white people who helped the black out. Vocab was balanced quite well, had your flow on lock and everything basically...Liked the strong yet emotional vibe it had to it...

Solid piece!

DQ

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1967779
there go my link....also uppin dis thang...........

nice man i read it finished and did the black power sign lol...j/p

nah nice content, gd flow, vocab was good could be a bit better, longer drop craved here..lol keep em comin man - 8/10 :thumbup:

i'm feeling this joint...concept was nice...lyric were just inspirational...makes you think...flipped a few misconceptions that many of my people dont think about or realize yamean...this was nice fam...this is what i like to see...the only thing was the font was to small...lol...stay up

I was reallin feelin this fam, i liked the concept alot especially during black history month...at least i think its february. Work on your imagery just a little bit though, other than that i thought it was a nice drop...8.5/10

RTF in te sig fam...keep the chain going...