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In Love With You...
In Love With You I been thinking and I got something to tell you baby There is something I am starting to feel between you and me It's like without you a vital part of me is missing Or is it really you who I am missing I remember all of the good times, including the kissing You dont have to tell me, I already know you miss me I already know you cant take two steps without thinking about me Well I cant take one minute without remembering you It was like a way of life, me and you The way we were, thought we would last forever I guess forever is short these days,now I am without you forever Now I just wish to ask what I have wanted to ask you Why did you leave me when I told you I was in love with you? |
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I don't think you put much efort in this drop. I mean it can be way better and expressing love should have super poems. nah mean?
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I didn't really like this one but it was aight.
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I love this drop: it's packed with such pure emotion and I love the concept of it, especially those 2 last lines with the question you ask. You found a good balance with your vocab, structure made it easy to read and I just liked how your story progressed. Good drop!
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honestly, i really liked it
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