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Damage is Done (H.B.C.)
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177715 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177551 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177431 i took the words from a paper i wrote for class and flip them into a song... http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2028854&q=Lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2028854&q=Hi http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/t...ixcubemusic.htm |
The Beat is looking nice ... nicely done on the production etheir you did it or not...
hmm the flow ain't bad at all the flow was nice... you do need to work on some breathcontroll, delivery and articulation of everything you spit needs to be worked on... instead of that nice looks all around it wasn't bad, bring your potential to the mic bro return tha favor aight; http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177309 peace DraXe 1 |
Beat was nice
Lyrics were good YOu should've never yelled at the end of ya bars I feel it you voice sounds like you fat, Flow was on point nice shit duke |
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beat is nice... kicks in nicely ur flow is on beat quality is pretty gd only thing is im proper noticing ur breaths and when ur running out of breath - work on that but i think this track is pretty dope man, keep em comin :thumbup: favour returned |
this beat is fuckin fire.........Mayn shit from Papoose and shit..
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this guy aight beat hot , flow is you lol :-) , breathe control my nigga everything else pretty solid ....good shit dawgy
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yoo this shit right here man content is fuckin real as shit felt....i never noticed the breath control problem on this song til now..flow was pretty good lyrics as well ...uve come along way keep elevating u can only get better props
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Dog i can't believe you.......you snapped on that track dog i love the rhyme schem you put it together nicely and i don't have that much air but i have a couple freestyles goin up in a few days with the exact same beat dog. That was a sick song though. It's nice to hear lyrics with meaning nowadays in this world where 50's lambourgini doors on his escalade are more important than the state of our people.
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this beat sound dope... where u get it?...
flow, you come on nicely-- ooh rv gettin some more talent, cool- delivery is pretty solid man, u a little out-there but easy on the ears like commercial cats... u got a message with your rhymes Wooot... lyrically solid- and its one of the more entertaining songs that I've seen lately. maybe something more on the last hook, cuz you let the beat do its thing but you could be re-inforcing what you was sayin... solid joint though foreal man, keep droppin em..stay active 1 |
yea Seven...bmore is startin to come heavy..;)
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