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Da Tongue Rapist vs J.
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3 days is the limit on this B...I'll post after you do...mine's already written but I hate wasting verses so you're opsting 1st...keep in mind I'm an audio head, I don't got stretched bars...so my shit's written so you can actually spit it... Minimum posts to vote: 25 Check in by: 02-22-05 at 02:27 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Da Tongue Rapist has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 02:28 PM.
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FUCK it, I'm bored so I'll just post it...don't make me wasit a little 7 lines, lol...I haven't battled in so long *cleans off rust*
this lil' nigga'll fall off before his nuts even drop ain't shit you spittin' hot whether you tryin' or not and you can catch the “flow” you know you just a period dot so what ya last words rhyme, you ain’t got a iLL line J dot’s hot?…NOT!...that’s a damn lie FUCK with the name, it's red dots on ya frame when ya lines all the same ain't no "pointing" to ya "aim" |
J. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 03:34 AM.
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My bad, yo.
Didnt know about this. |
If there is any AIMing for votes, or PMed votes, or 'returned favor' votes...I'll know. Trust me, I know people.
Wasted verses? DTR, ya raps are worthless, Said ya got tricks up ur sleeve... ...and then ur fuckin’ shirtless. So stop and rehearse this, cause... Ya, it hurts bitch, and I’ll leave you roasted, Cause this thread is dope... til you post in it. Cause it’s Men >Women, even if ur ontop, Either way, I’m cumin... ...while ur ridin’ my fuckin cock. So let’s stop this onslaught, leave u left alone... Cause the only time you rock... ...is in a wooden chair, at home. |
Voted For: Da Tongue Rapist
ya know to be honest i thought that da tongue rapist took this one .. it was a close battle but J. have a flow really well it did at the start but it went haywire at the end thats the only reason you lost this one .. otherwise both your punches evened out .. but over all DTR took it some of the words were played but i thought DTR used em better.. punches//tie metas//tie structure//DTR personals//...? who needs to elevate?//both of ya no hate Vote//Da Tounge Rapist |
Voted For: Da Tongue Rapist
eh no hate but damn J's verse wasnt all that great...at least DTR tried at punches and mets...you coulda easiy picked at her name i mean come on now.. no excuse.. my vote is for DTR. did ya thing girl ..mad simple shit tho..i dont wanna see shit like that again! |
shuddup loser, you know I don't like battling, I just do it here cuz I'm bored and I wanna see how people will voTe, lmao...
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Voted For: Da Tongue Rapist
Blah, for an audio head, ya should be droppin more creativity, an Rapist, it is kinda like your trynna flow audio in Text, if that makes any sense lol Few alright lines tho'...but some shit was uneccessary an pointless, J dots hot, thats a damn lie....that seemed forced an pointless, the closer was the highlight of your battle, you just gotta be more creative, an try an master the art of text if you insist on doin it, but from what i seen of you, your better off with audios, ya style suites it more, no hate tho'... J? lol...................... Not feelin your verse, some of your shit didnt even rhyme, an you lacked alot of creativity, an you could of used your personals alot better, all Rapist did was play off your name, an she still got u, upp ya game, no hate, just tellin it how i see it RTF Peace |
^ yes I know...I despise text, I do it to see how people wil voTe...and I haven't battled in 4ever, when I actually did text and battled I was really good, so good I got no-showed 4 times in a row, that's when I figured I'd go audio = )...
but yeah, I'm not gonna do text on the regular so it doesn't matter, lol... |
This was feedback posted for J.
join my crew and ill help you elevate fast...
$1,000,000 rv dollar signing bonus http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179459 da tounge rapist youre invited too :thumbup: |
This was feedback posted for Da Tongue Rapist
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Voted For: Da Tongue Rapist
that was soorta a weak battle from J. i didnt see much i liked in his verse.. but da tounge had some good lines and a good flow and his punches hit hard, but J. had none of that its was sorta dribble.. opener - tounge closer - tounge flow - tounge punches - tounge vocab - tounge enjoyment - tounge vote - tounge.. no hate its how i saw it... |
Hey wanna return the favor... can u plz drop a vote on my battle.. check the sig
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