Threw this together in 2mins for english class gimmie some feed
 

I know the structure sucks... and its not pro like my older stuff but i did in in class...

Happiness

All I see is razor blades to skin shades
Slit my wrists and watch as my life fades
Can’t take the bad grades, forget this place
“Your life’s a disgrace” but its one you can’t replace
Won’t you miss this face, and the summer escapes
You won’t be saying much when you see the videotapes
Countless attempts, this time I followed through
Take a quick look at my short life review
Age of one….you started to abuse your only son
Age of two… continued only harder than when I was one
Three to eight my heart begins to hate
I start to ponder is this hate my eternal fate?
The beating continues ten to thirteen
My skins turns shaded black blue and green
Fourteen, fifteen forget life I want to leave this scene
Sixteen… forget it there will be no seventeen
Quick.. Im out of here, Breath the last breath
Cause the only way to happiness is death


nothin too special.. jus threw it together lemme know your thoughts etc...


link....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177355

Your avy is dope

an it took you 2 minutes ta drop this peice?
it was phat as fuck for a 2 minute drop man
6/10

Return the fave on my open mic called Look Mom

Thanx homie

Peace

ty for the rating... ill take a look asap... yeah it took 2 mins when the teacher was walkin around i finished like 30 sec's before she got to my work lol

uppity up up up

this was pretty cool homie, it wasnt nutin special but it was pretty good for 2 minutes keep doin ya shit homie