Jay-SmileZ vs Sean G.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-19-05 at 09:08 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Jay-SmileZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 08:44 PM.

Sean G. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 08:45 PM.

been here since november, and i already have more posts, man thats sad,
i would try to tell people you suck, but your IP already says your bad!
he throws punches but there are a couple things that he lacks,
they all miss, unoriginal, and overall are just plain wack.
Jay smilez when he realizes that he faces crap and can win without skill,
your rhymes are more boring and flat than your hat's bill!
he looks like a boy band singer, and reps a hat with a singers name,
RIP pun cuz all of your rhymes are yawn worthy and sound the same.
his punches will consist of making fun of my picture and my face,
but i can tell ya man, if this was a one man race youd still come in last place.
skinny as fuck so he tries to say cake to keep himself content,
A tHrEAt? I tHiNk aN E ThUg Is WhAt hE mEaNt!
poor peutrorican, lives in the projects and lives by picking up change,
got rejected by code steel? guess he isnt as good as he claims.

I have more posts, and I have been here two days.
He said don’t be scared of his punches, but they suck
Name play and his opponents were bad
His picture shows him and his hat bill was flat
In another pic he has a timberland hat, and he looks like that one guy from backstreet boys
He calls people cakes, basically word play
Types LiKe ThIs. Which is dumb as hell
He lives in the projects
Got rejected by code steel, some new crew that doesnt have a great line up.

you "DIE VERBALLY" u cant up ya game so "FLY BIRDIE"/
I'm know to put heat to rookies chest like new MIAMI JERSEY'S// (the heat logo on the maimi heat jersey)

U never FOLDIN EIGHTS your destined to be blazed so i Go-wit-FATE//
BOLDer wit RAGE u must be on a diet cause u never HOLDin WEIGHT//

i was TOLD-I'D-Be-GREAT sean getting SHOTS-to-his-FACE like I'M BALLING/
SEAN does drop hot shit...u know when Diarehhea CALLING//

I POP the FOURS-IN bring real heat for once to this ChilD.... J to the S to the motherfucking MILES/
this nigga going down like young crach whores on PEDOPHILES// (Pedophile is a sick guy who stalks young girls)

I' WRECK-IN-STYLE seans ass is on fire...cause he admitts HEMM-ROIDS/
he cant RAISE his BARS high an leveled like me even if he hits STEROIDS// (Bars as in verse)

Good luck man. This should be interesting to see.

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

here's my opinion on who put it down in this battle:
opener: j-smilez
vocab: j-s
structure: j-s
multis: j-s
closer: j-s
jay smilez came harder in the battle & hit wit more punches then sean g; sean i'm not hating but u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes
also make sure 2 return the favor

This was feedback posted for Jay-SmileZ
 

checkin pollz.....................................

Least leave some kind of feedback, i need to get better.

Voted For: Sean G.

Jay-I'm thinking you bitted that from goldmic. You had punches decent and very much effective. Flow was eh ok. Personals you had none. (thats when you know he's bitting)


SeanG- Aiight, nice punches. Personals you had was good. Flowed good too. Meta'z was ok. Wordplay's was good.


overall=This battle is a good one, but i have to go with sean. He had personals and punches in his verses. Flowed better too. Jay-smilez, you punches that was decent, but what caught you was personals, didnt have any. Plus sean g punches was very much effective than yours i may add. So my vote goes to sean g.

what the fuck are u talking about nigga... i dont bite u fucking idiot...his name is Sean G fool i got no personals with that he has no signature under his name an his pic was used against him already in his last battle u smuck no personals was there to be given..

hating on a niggas skill..i been battling on the net for 1 year on the network54 sites bitch ...u tend to be nice in time..an whats this site goldmic gimme the link i'll go battle over there if they so raw like me

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ


punches-Sean G
multi's-Jay
wordplay-Sean G
creativity-Sean G
structure-Tie

overall this battle was one sided to me, Sean just came consistant with his punches, nice wordplay, and had some aight creativity in there, Jay could have gottin close to Sean if he simply would just stretch his verse's, he had some decent punches, i thought his wordplay was weak, the only thing jay had over Sean was multi's.........

V/Sean G

Vote switched

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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

punches.... j.s
personals.... sean g
multis......j.s
metas..... j.s
originallity.....sean g

over all vote....jay smilez....
no beef just came harder...had something good in most his lines....sean g just had like 2.....that ip line was hot but not good enuff to win...\/\/\/ plz return favor

This was feedback posted for Sean G.
 

hahahaha lmao at the first line........ too tired to vote tho.....