. . vs eph
 

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. . has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 12:05 AM.

stupid bitch just accept that you'll get punched and then bruised
whats under your name isnt prehistoric, just all the punches you use
rip this bitch, destroy her entire rep when i bruise her
cuz when these punches take flight, ya left as a soar loser
see you wonder why none around you, far from the best
..cuz all your family fucking DIED after reading some of ya text
see i rip shit strategically while you throw punches helter skelter
stupid bitch thought she was eminem just cuz she lives at the shelter!
guys only want your ugly ass for the money, usually a loner
see ya man has it hard....cuz you cant even give him a boner

vote on quality not quantity

eph has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 12:23 AM.

kid your not a cantidate, so set aside the mic.
perform ya best, ppl still didnt vote napolean dynomite.
joined RV as of today, wants to show some promise.
dun i'll stump ya, like iMacs in the hands of the omish.
why attempt a win? its like getting OJ off the meds.
claim you was dope, then got owned by a topical head.
hes got diddy's ego, heres some words to know & quote.
dont beef cali, if you dont even have enough posts to vote.
at least diddy's got a name though, this lame doesnt.
most newbs hate to lose, but like wicked...he loves it.
says hes dope, but ya got less lines than a commuter lane.
so much for rep, we cant even pronounce his user name.
rematch me tomorrow, theres nothing left to say.
plus, i need time to prewrite on a guy who just joined today.

Voted For: eph

close battle rly weak but im gonna have to give my vote to eph camr hard with the punchs both tryed persnals but some of them land and didnt but eph definatly camer ahrd with the punches not very good batttle in my eyes but epg came much harder on the punches . . wot kind of name is that u came weak aswell didnt have no good pucnhes that alnded well

so now i see what they meant when they said the site was all dickriders

that wasnt a dick ride vote mates it the truth and get a name change

Voted For: . .

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stupid bitch just accept that you'll get punched and then bruised
whats under your name isnt prehistoric, just all the punches you use
played to death, still, decent
rip this bitch, destroy her entire rep when i bruise her
cuz when these punches take flight, ya left as a soar loser
nah
see you wonder why none around you, far from the best
..cuz all your family fucking DIED after reading some of ya text
no
see i rip shit strategically while you throw punches helter skelter
stupid bitch thought she was eminem just cuz she lives at the shelter!
lmao... this was nice
guys only want your ugly ass for the money, usually a loner
see ya man has it hard....cuz you cant even give him a boner
nah.

Decent verse. You had a couple of good lines (your opener and the eminem thing.) Couldn't really see anything else going for ya. All-in-all, a pretty decent.

eph:

IP:


kid your not a cantidate, so set aside the mic.
perform ya best, ppl still didnt vote napolean dynomite.
nah
joined RV as of today, wants to show some promise.
dun i'll stump ya, like iMacs in the hands of the omish
no, comparisons are wack
why attempt a win? its like getting OJ off the meds.
claim you was dope, then got owned by a topical head
no, who owned him?
hes got diddy's ego, heres some words to know & quote.
dont beef cali, if you dont even have enough posts to vote
nah
at least diddy's got a name though, this lame doesnt.
most newbs hate to lose, but like wicked...he loves it
nah
says hes dope, but ya got less lines than a commuter lane.
so much for rep, we cant even pronounce his user name
no
rematch me tomorrow, theres nothing left to say.
plus, i need time to prewrite on a guy who just joined today
nah

Pretty weak verse. Couldn't see anything from you that came close to good. Stay away from using comparisons. No quoteable's. and . . had 2 so...

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see you wonder why none around you, far from the best
..cuz all your family fucking DIED after reading some of ya text

Thats fucked up yo, *shakes head*

Fucka voting.

Voted For: eph

wow this was a close battle.. ughh Eph came a little bit harder on the personals, and i dont see how this cats a newb, if he knows ur a female.. but thats besides the point.. the Amish* line was tight.. it sounded vague but meh it was still pretty good.. and . . prehistoric line was iight.. but overall i gotta go with Eph due to the fact she had harder hitting punches and nice flow the whole way thru...

Voted For: eph

eph:

kid your not a cantidate, so set aside the mic.
perform ya best, ppl still didnt vote napolean dynomite.
^^lol good opener nice meta 7/10
joined RV as of today, wants to show some promise.
dun i'll stump ya, like iMacs in the hands of the omish.
^^good bar nice consistency 7/10
why attempt a win? its like getting OJ off the meds.
claim you was dope, then got owned by a topical head.
^^good bar 6/10
hes got diddy's ego, heres some words to know & quote.
dont beef cali, if you dont even have enough posts to vote.
^^lmao good bar 8/10
at least diddy's got a name though, this lame doesnt.
most newbs hate to lose, but like wicked...he loves it.
^^decent 5/10
says hes dope, but ya got less lines than a commuter lane.
so much for rep, we cant even pronounce his user name.
^^good personal 8/10
rematch me tomorrow, theres nothing left to say.
plus, i need time to prewrite on a guy who just joined today.
^^lol good closer 7/10

overall: 48/70 (69%)

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stupid bitch just accept that you'll get punched and then bruised
whats under your name isnt prehistoric, just all the punches you use
^^decent bar 6/10
rip this bitch, destroy her entire rep when i bruise her
cuz when these punches take flight, ya left as a soar loser
^^dope meta good punch 8/10
see you wonder why none around you, far from the best
..cuz all your family fucking DIED after reading some of ya text
^^decent 6/10
see i rip shit strategically while you throw punches helter skelter
stupid bitch thought she was eminem just cuz she lives at the shelter!
^^lmao funny bar but set up wack 7/10
guys only want your ugly ass for the money, usually a loner
see ya man has it hard....cuz you cant even give him a boner
^^ehh decent 5/10

overall: 32/50 (64%)

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Voted For: eph

..
um your stucture was ight flow was decent got messed up thos cuz of the bad syylable count, punches were ight but they werent quite hitting ya feel me. the fishing bars were pretty good but the set up lines werent that great, work on ya punches a little more ight pz

eph:
nothing ive never seen but your stucture was flawless your flow was a little buged up to cuz of the bad syylable count but your punches were hitting hard, i was feeling them, but pretty good for a quick key, peace

RTF in my battle with final links in the sig. pz

Voted For: eph

hmm, yeah, lets do it like this

eph, had some pretty solid six in there, i enjoyed this verse, your structure flow was good, easy money there.....vocab and worplay, decent, nothing special but good none the less....personals were good, thought you did more damage with punches, but you did good on both those aspects....you stayed more consistent with dissin, came harder, decent drop here

quotables:
joined RV as of today, wants to show some promise.
dun i'll stump ya, like iMacs in the hands of the omish.
says hes dope, but ya got less lines than a commuter lane.
so much for rep, we cant even pronounce his user name.

. ., nice opener, but i feel you got kinda weak after that....had some major played shit there, nothing special, thought intro was the best line, structure was off at times, but it flowed decent....not that good of personals or punches which is what separates you two....wordplay was okay, vocab can be upped....like i said, came out with a solid opener, then just faded away.....

v/eph