Footsteps (redone)
 

I used 50 cents footsteps chorus with a little change i aint done its just a quick drop telll me what you think and im down for a collab on this


[LexiKon]

Sometimes this world is to sick to see,

that all it brings along is pain and misery,

so when i need to take a time out i put on pac and he speaks to me,

"i wake up in the mornin and i ask myself,

is life worth livin should i blast myself",

memorys of better days rushin through my mind,

i wish i could just say fuck this and leave it all behind,

why dont i pull the trigger while this gun as at my temple,

just one bullet can end my it'd be simple,

but i couldn't stand for my mom to shed a tear,

i cant be the one to fullfil her deepest fear,

no matter the pressur i gotta keep my head above the water,

ima make it through this life thats been nothin but mindless slaughter,

i ain't givin up ain't an ounce of quiter in me,

thats the breakdown put plain and simply,

[Chorus: 50 Cent - repeat 2X]

First there was two sets of footprints in the sand,

Then there was one set of footprints in the sand,

When times get hard and i aint got a plan,

God don't walk with me, he carry me man,

i liked it nice opener i really liked the closer nice flow and structre 7/10

This open mic was allright. It was kind of short...but it got the point across. Only thing I didn't really like is how you quoted other people in it. But other than that good drop man. 6.5/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...664#post1971664

^ Drop feed on my open mic please.

thanks for the feedback upin

This shit was kinda short, but it was still at good quality. I was feelin it. I felt it flowed good and all, and i think you came out strong wit tha opener, and stayed that way til the end. Nice shit. 7/10



Everybody...look for that south sac shit comin from us soon!!!!