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Are you up there?
Are you up there? In God we trust...But is he even there? Or is it a she? Either way it doesn't care. This world just isn't fair, we fail to succeed. If there really is a God...Why is there no hope for all my dreams? It just doesn't seem right, once a child with such good visions. Watching family members pass away...my home was like a prison. Then I came to my decision, there's no God...Just loss... If it's really watching over us...why the fucking Holocaust? Why are we bossed by higher powers, that are leaving us depressed? Who can blow up the entire world time times over within a button being pressed. I must confess is leaves me stressed and wondering why... If God has the power to create us...Why does he let us die? People struggle to get by...But fuck them, pay for our wars. Leave the homeless people on the streets, instead of behind warm doors. Our precious girls turn into whores, just for drugs and money. It kind of bugs me how people take this is a joke...It isn't fucking funny. So...If God is running this world, why is it such a disaster? It might of created everything, but fucked it up even faster. Why do we follow masters...Who tell us to join in revolution? And why do people follow them?...Killing isn't a solution. A world more like pollution, it really is a shame... But was it us? Or is there a God that we have to blame? |
Also everybody should check out these open mics...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1971669 Footsteps (redone) - LexiKon http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1971671 Nok Yaself Out +round2+ - Dio Deus and TheWackestMC http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1971674 the Blow Off - Sin |
Upping for feedback.
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pretty good, it makes you think about it. good multi's too, nothing to say about it.
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this was pretty dope...liked the topic...and it seems like a lot a thought went into it...7/10
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^ Wrote it in 10 minutes pen and paper style lastnight while my dad checked his e-mail.
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this was rather simple i thought .. concept kinda been overdone and this wasnt something to stand out from the others .. so overall nuttin special stay up
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this was pretty dope....had decent emotion in it.....vocab was ok....overall this was a pretty decent drop.....7/10.....
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i dunno, wasnt really feelin it, seemed like you were kinda swaying at time from the topic...it kinda seems like you want to get at there is a god, but we, the people keep screwing things up, but then you go back to blaming god....had good emotion though/passion.....wird
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not bad the stucture is weak but thats cause of your writing on pen n papper i bet if you would of wrote on the comp it woulda been better but still its not bad like you gotta get usto papper n shit so keep doin it the emotion was good the flow was alright the vocab was good so just the stucture but i dont care cuz you wrote on papper but its decent
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this was a nice drop that made you look at things in a different perspective i see where your comin from mad at god questioning his decisions i've been down that road i liked the structure and how you had three words that rhymed it kept the flow goin
thanks for the props keep doin what you do 8.3/10 |
^ Word, thank-you... Uppin.
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nice shit, man. keep at it.......1
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^ Word, thanks man...upping this shit.
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Good topic and vocab i had to pause for a min and take a look around me.Good shit :thumbup:
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