Showstopper vs Indeph
 

Battle Rules:
8 lines
drop in 30 mins, kid
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-20-05 at 07:18 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed - went over 8 line limit

Showstopper has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 07:03 PM.

Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 07:12 PM.

Let me explain,how you got your name to lead up...
Showstopper comes out.......and people leave the arena...
That's hurtful I know,but at least they awoke though..
I fit your name better,Cause I make niggas no show..
I feel bad for your coast though,it once had tight minds
but with you on the team,the west proves why it aint the right side
want my thrown? I know that you aimed but you missed though..
Always comin up short...but with the name of the bigshow..*
All peronals used,alot wrong with you,but you know its ture
so Your rankings so fuckin low,I can kneel and roll over you
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*Bigshows' nickname was showstopper on the WWE


fuck changin font

g'luck

Did some searching, and his girls name is April

You're a homo thug... on a man, you go down south
And jus like yo sig, you like the rods up near yo mouth
IGA my ass, I'll fuck your girl, I got the power
Cuz when "April" rains, I jus "may" go and fuck her in the shower
You're 14 yrs old, you're a stupid lil cunt
Why the "periods", "bitch", is it that time of the month?
You "beef" instigator, I'll "cook" you "well done"
Cuz you're jus like a "burger", you go inbetween the "buns"

Voted For: Indeph

this was an interesting battle but here's my opinion:
opener: indeph
voacb: both
structure: indeph
multis: indeph
closer: showstopper
it was close but indeph had a few more punches in his verse then showstopper did; & no hate but showstopper in battles diss the otha person more then throw 1 or 2 disses bout they girl
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Showstopper

haha funny asss shit man

i thought your punches were creative a tad bit played though... but you jus kept it com'n
your structure was a lil off but he i thought you kept yourself together thats why your gett'n my vote

your punches were creative so you had this one

punches//ss
meta//ss
wordplay//ss
struc//indep
appeal//ss



vote//showstopper

no hate ~1~

Voted For: Indeph

Indeph- Punches was good very decent. Flowed nicly. Personasl was good you picked up some info. Wordplays was decent. NEED SOME FUCKING MULTI'Z.

Showstopper- Aiiiight, The punches here was good, they was some insults. Flowed good. Personasl you picked up was good. Wordplay can't say you have some, but you dont.


Overall=This battle was good, SHowstopper you had some good punches with flow and personals. Indeph nice punches, with some good flow, and decent wordplay. My vote goes to indeph. I had read show's verse over and over, manly you was talking about his girl, you need to direct punches to HIM manly and then his girl. Indeph came harder with punches DIRECTED AT YOU!

wun

Voted For: Showstopper

ok this was a close battle. both showed potential to come way harder than they did. Indeph's verse was just a bunch of punches on the name. they were good but they also weren't what i expected to see from you. show stopper on the other hand had a lot of gay punches. the April line was probably the one that won it to me cause that was maybe the the best line out of the battle. the rest of his was also aight like indephs. some of indephs was also maybe a lil better. so basically show stopper gets my vote. he one in my book because of 1 line

This was feedback posted for Showstopper
 

Both verses were wak
Indeph didnt even rhyme when he started off
Showstopper openor was pure trash
Elivate with punches and personals or quit battling

This was feedback posted for Indeph
 

fuclk yAW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

Voted For: Indeph

nice verse indepth... you kept it simple but it was very effective...

Let me explain,how you got your name to lead up...
Showstopper comes out.......and people leave the arena...
^^ nice opener and good name play 8/10
That's hurtful I know,but at least they awoke though..
I fit your name better,Cause I make niggas no show..
^^ nice punch 7/10
I feel bad for your coast though,it once had tight minds
but with you on the team,the west proves why it aint the right side
^^ nice goof flow and alryyt punch 7/10
want my thrown? I know that you aimed but you missed though..
Always comin up short...but with the name of the bigshow..*
^^ good punch lol 7.5/10
All peronals used,alot wrong with you,but you know its ture
so Your rankings so fuckin low,I can kneel and roll over you
^^ haha nice closure decent punch 7.5/10

i liked your verse alot... you had some decent punches in ther and a couple of gd personals well done... your flow went a lil but off point in a couple parts but it wasnt all that bad...

overall ill give you: 37/50

showstopper:

hmmmi didnt really like your verse that much... what iswith all the quotes.. your vocab was a little too simple for my liking you had a good personal in there and thats bout it...

You're a homo thug... on a man, you go down south
And jus like yo sig, you like the rods up near yo mouth
^^ spsoeit was ight not good punc though 5/10
IGA my ass, I'll fuck your girl, I got the power
Cuz when "April" rains, I jus "may" go and fuck her in the shower
^^ good.. couldav been worded better... 6/10
You're 14 yrs old, you're a stupid lil cunt
Why the "periods", "bitch", is it that time of the month?
^^ alryyt first line fell off 5.5/10
You "beef" instigator, I'll "cook" you "well done"
Cuz you're jus like a "burger", you go inbetween the "buns"
^^ good closure and dcent punch and wordplay 6.5/10

overall ill give you: 23/50...

i gave this to indepth becuz he had better punches better vocab wordplay and all in all a better verse...

no hate...

return the favout links are in the sig pz.