My My My (drop linkz) a song we performing
 

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iight drop linkz and ima reply the same day if not, the next day, we're performing this track at a club, tell me how the you know the crowd will like it

Verse 1: Es Judah
Verse 2: Lenny Blaze
Verse 3: Yung Ace

please dont reply with a "nice track" and expect me to do a full response back

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Right off the bat, it doesn't seem like a club song to me. Sounds like a nice track to do at a show, but not at a club. At a club I would expect a little more hype of a song. The song is tight though......you might say jea a little too much though.....lol.

thanx man, uppin this

OH WHAT WHAT LENNY BLAZE IN THIS TOO...haha thaz dope....he anotha dope nigga from hamilton..he lives like down the street from me...word dup....its carlin fam..waz good...

iight listenin as typin....
first dude kinda sounds goofy, no hatred- i mean before spitting, his voice sound goofy like he forcin something... first cat comin on the track... decent prescence, could use a little more, flow is boring- very commercial, very basic, lyrically its an mtv track- nothing out of the ordinary, not bad, but just not my style. Second cat- sound very similar to the first cat only your voice is lighter. Your flow is a little less fluid as well- got the right idea just need more practice... Hook, its pretty cool with the female voice in the background, 3rd cat - best presence i think so far, his diction is very good, Im understanding every syllable, no surprises here either... I think some more complex verses woulda really set this off w/ some crazy wordplay or something to grab my attention, I understand its a girly track for the ladies, but you can still come with a verse for the emcees listenin... stay up fellas... 1