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X-CELL vs Pounds
Battle Rules:
8-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting pink slip battle who ever loses can NEVER battle on rv again Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-24-05 at 11:32 AM Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in. |
X-CELL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 12:36 PM.
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Pounds has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 12:56 PM.
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since he 1st registerd he put his album as his own team no release date set 4 pen 2 pad must ran out of ink his onli decent bars camr from wen he drew a prison image lives on rv,wen he gets da boot hell b on da street like evicted tenants and hes made up neva had sex,from a place dat doesnt exist used 2 human handjobs YEA!! wen a manican beats his dik had 2 watch discovery chanell just so he can get some heart his line count down 2 his death so at da end of his verse his funeral starts.. |
(I WROTE THIS TO THE "TILL I COLAPSE" BEAT FROM THE EMINEM SHOW)
i drop "POUNDS" like jared did,gettin rid of this kid is imperative i make u run like mascara did,take 2 steps like ciara did/ its a must,i look at him with uter disgust,ya got no purpose abolshin u is a service,u know that i know that ya nervous/ im gonna end ya shit, u aint legit, u soo corny the only time u come hard is when u honrey u not talented just quit, ya flows put together poorly/ i feel possed like pacs right next to me pound it really is best ya leave im comin so agressivley/ this pussys beat down take a seat now/ |
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Voted For: Pounds
Breakdown... Name:Pounds Verse: since he 1st registerd he put his album as his own team no release date set 4 pen 2 pad must ran out of ink his onli decent bars camr from wen he drew a prison image lives on rv,wen he gets da boot hell b on da street like evicted tenants and hes made up neva had sex,from a place dat doesnt exist used 2 human handjobs YEA!! wen a manican beats his dik had 2 watch discovery chanell just so he can get some heart his line count down 2 his death so at da end of his verse his funeral starts.. Need/Don’t need to work on:um...nice drop fam...work on making those punches hit a little harder, other than that its straight. Stats... Punches:6/10 Metaphors:6/10 Wordplay:0/10 Structure:7/10 Personals:7/10 Total:28/50 Percentage:56% ---------------------------------------------------- Name:X-Cell Verse: IP: (I WROTE THIS TO THE "TILL I COLAPSE" BEAT FROM THE EMINEM SHOW) i drop "POUNDS" like jared did,gettin rid of this kid is imperative i make u run like mascara did,take 2 steps like ciara did/ its a must,i look at him with uter disgust,ya got no purpose abolshin u is a service,u know that i know that ya nervous/ im gonna end ya shit, u aint legit, u soo corny the only time u come hard is when u honrey u not talented just quit, ya flows put together poorly/ i feel possed like pacs right next to me pound it really is best ya leave im comin so agressivley/ this pussys beat down take a seat now/ Need/Don’t need to work on:sup dawg, um...i think you need to work on connecting with your punches...dont use fake punches...they dont relate to anybody which makes it a fake verse...no hate fam..."keep ya head up" Stats: Punches:3/10 Metaphors:0/10 Wordplay:0/10 Structure:3/10 Personals:3/10 Total:9/50 Percentage:18% RTF in the sig against J DOT...no hate to any of these competitors fam...pz... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i destroyed this kid what u smokin?
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No you didnt, uppin 4 more votes.
You about 2 leave tha site 4 good |
who ever loses dosent leave the site they cant battle anymore
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What!!pink slip means you have 2 leave and since this a pink slip battle when you lose you have 2 leave
If you dont know what a pink slip battle is then you dumb as hell |
Uppin more votes, don't sleep on thiss battle.
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Voted For: X-CELL
i think pounds took this one with harder punches. they werent that hard, but i think he came harder with em in this battle. even tho yo structure was not good, and u need to work on that, i still managed to understand ur verse, and some of tha shit u had in there, and i think u came off harder. and ur verse was also more interesting. xcell,-u had a good verse, but i think u should really work on coming harder ,and thinkin of better punches, and personals. ur punches were manageable, but ur personals seemed played, and incomplete. i think u should work on that. i did see good structure in yo verse. no stretched or incomplete bars, which was good, but i still think pounds came off harder...NO HATE fam...just keep elevating... and plz RTF on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...=177888...cause i took my time out to vote on this....and plz make it explained... ~ 1~ Vote switched |
my bad...i'll get that switched right now..............
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