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Da NFamous 07-24-02 06:35 PM

Harsh Life
 
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The love has me blinded, by things that I can't see~
Never ever known true love to be good, never had that feeling of extasy~
Feelings blown away in despair~
Heart torn apart, while I'm bleeding when I stare~
Why the fuck don't you care?~
Why the fuck am I even here?~
The pain I have to endure while listening to your excuse~
That the reason you were with me was you felt bad - what's the use?~
The hate I feel is killing me inside~
Your latest excuse has me killing my soul, waiting for myself to die~
You never loved me,you told me that you only felt bad~
Then you wonder why when I talk to you I'm always opressed and sad~
So fuck the world, let them See me weep~
cuz when I heard those words, I was looking for a cliff from which my soul could leap~~


Da NFamous
suicidal thoughts encased in life's extacy manifested~
riverbanks of blood with the flow of euphoria encrested~
tricking lies trickling thru the water of love~
turning tainted by the mass mockery of the above~
two symbolistic messiahs sheltering hate and rage~
harboring pain for poetic purity the same blood in both veigns~
the coldest life can offer is a being opposed to it~
so i shun the world turning from love closing my eyes to it~
a black heart engulfed in anguish shining thru white light~
hell's gates capturing my untapped evil from my life of fight~
living by none other then severe lividity dying by lead fire~
brushed under social acceptances glare remainning low with hopes higher~
darkness looms and rain pours from the sky torn and blood infested~
suicidal thoughts encased in life's extacy manifested~
1luv.

DirtBoy69 07-25-02 07:07 AM

strong collabo the two styles fit together well nice rhyming on both sides

Da NFamous 07-25-02 11:58 AM

thanks elevatin, 1luv.

varentao 07-25-02 12:59 PM

the first part was raw...just like the guy was really hurting, emotions pure...then it seems you (NFamous) put it in perspective - or an oversight - of it, in a technical and kind of deep way, executed very well...

really liked it...respect...

Da NFamous 07-25-02 02:19 PM

thanks, thats all i seek, 1luv.

Da NFamous 07-25-02 09:50 PM

elevatin for feedback

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 07-26-02 08:31 AM

Tight ish ,mad collab ...
diggin it ...
Loved it all so no need fo` quotes,
Keep spittin ...

~1~

Da NFamous 07-26-02 09:58 AM

^appreciative of the props dimeond, still elevatin, 1luv.


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