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The Jungle
acrobatic gorrilas spittin and flippin over guerilla war//
lyricism assault rifles slicin through hearts becoming lodged in the core// lethal stealthy tactics hidin under fallen trees hittin enemies with fatality// exercisin free will through bloodshed no nigga is clappin me// enbeleiveable unacheivable status general ranked in combat// murdering brutally maliciously killing more emcees a year then a gat// hardcore reality brain tingling splattering death// blood smeared on the face of the fearless the blood of fallen vets// timeless battle stories of complex lyrical bars// un hearable roars from the peircing battle verses of uncoherable stars// rotating acl discs with disses turning corps into corpses// rapping with the speed of 100 trained thurobred horses// hanging from tree limbs staring down with tainted eyes// unwavering trust in your skill speaking of horible deaths reaquanted with cries// soldiers live real thugs live wannabes often die// rap battles that make you wish for only a day you could recooperate in the streets of bedford stuy// focusing your will to live in rapping the survival of gems, protected like pearls// respect and bragging rights is the reward for living in other words the gaining the world// whatchuthink? im just testing things out seeing what i can do, 1luv. |
HOT PIECE.... ill vocab. keep doin' your thing dog.
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you got a big vocab.....damn.....
that shit was pretty ill...i was feelin it from start to finish so keep spittin......what eva happened too that colab with you and acidic.......are yall still dropin that? peep some of mah shit 1 |
strong use of volcab and flow was alright nice peice keep this shit up
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as usaul u always have an ill-piece sorry for tha delay on my verse its just im havin a bit dificulty finishin it but i will be dun soon i need to finish tha last 2 bars
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^sounds good and from every1 else thanks for the recognition, elevatn, 1luv.
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Wasn't really feelin that piece. I felt it was a little overdone in sense of context and the use of vocab. The flow was consistent however. Just my opinion though. FLOW ON!!
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aight thanks for the constructive critisism, 1luv.
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elevation is key
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elevatin for feedback
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