Freeze or Burn...
 

Please read therily...

Im strappin up, hit the streets
niggaz backin up, now they meek.
cash stackin' up, packin heat
like sun rayz
nomore fun dayz
know its all about jewlry and gun blaze.
in my hood, thats how shit get settled
who ever got the loudest metal
whoeva drink the most, and hit the pedal.
but we dont call it ghetto
we call it home.
wit plenty fiendz to tha stone.
this is where they roam.
You gotta have either black or the chrome
cuz they got taps on the phone
fuck up once and that could be a cap to your dome.
Or they could fract-ure your bones.
and leave you on the dumbsta
belive me kid, i seen niggaz lose they head ova dumb stuff.
Thats why if you show luv,
i show luv.
But if theres hatred in your heart, there is no luv.
cuz they cant co-exist
dont get lost in the mist
of jelousy cuz thats a frozen-abyss.
listen kid theres so much lessons to learn.
the best is to earn
but in this life you either freeze or you burn............

And For An Impressive Encore You Can Tune In To Sesame Street This Friday Night At 8am Eastern Time On PBS Networks

ONCE AGAIN u came with Wack SHIT!!!....just quit Hip-Hop....4real though.....i aint hating but u just makin this open mic look like the "thug" Mc Hammer is Ghost writing....damn just get ya shit together.....4real



Peace....
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damn dogg why you gotta hate like that.....
you got beef wit dis nigga or somthin....
it wasnt that fuckin bad.....
i think that you came all right....
you didnt use complex vocab (which i dont like neway)., but you did work with a complex rhyme scheme....
ill give props where props are due and i think you came correct......

my only advice is shake all them bitch hatas off

oh ya....try to give feedback on some of mah shit

stay elevatin
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most def Damani, im always checkin out your shit. thanx
Rawdeadly? lol, sound like that white british bitch from American Idol on FOX. Keep doing your thing though....

nice concept..all though i did lack in structure. it was a little simple, but the idea, like i said, was diggable. Keep doin ya thing yo, and don't get discouraged.

Flow On....

Was kinda simple...Good concept like Black said...Just keep elevating...100

Damani-DaGrinch "my only advice is shake all them bitch hatas off"

How was his Cock being that it's real FAR DOWN ya throat feel like?
anyways....if u wanna spray off....go ahead but make sure u spray hard or not at all....and please no "thug" shit like ya cock suckin buddy just posted cuz Trust that shitty ass style will get destroyed.....




Peace.....
1............

its pretty tite..simple words..yet complex understanding..

Aight

peaz

hold up cuzz.....dont start runnin yo fuckin lips........

ill fuckin destroy you and expose you for the dick rydin bitch that you really are

Trust me Nigga 5 lines from me will Burn up ya WHOLE ENTIRE lil rap notebook you write ya wack shit in....and if u wanna test it.....just go ahead but like i typed b4......make sure u spray hard....or not at all......Fag.....



Peace......
1............



Ps:.....Make sure ya lyrics wear a Fire Proof Suit on.....bitch

Thats why if you show luv,
i show luv.
Im feelin this although it was simple ...
it had potential ...
Elevate ur vocab/flow ...
Keep doin ur thang, keep it real ...

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But if theres hatred in your heart, there is no luv.
cuz they cant co-exist
dont get lost in the mist
of jelousy cuz thats a frozen-abyss.
listen kid theres so much lessons to learn.
the best is to earn
but in this life you either freeze or you burn
~1~