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Reptitle 07-24-02 10:17 PM

that face
 
true lies when i look into your hateful eyes,
bitch, what the fuck you doin,
snitch, without no luck, you only brewin
the end of your life, dont think ill do it
try me....you think my verbal talents my only skill
i can get ill with the knife, but i choos not that life,
dont fuck with my emotions, the only notions
ive truly had fro the past year invovled ya face
now my pace is dry, now taste ya own lie,
ive had enough, ive had it rough, dont need
to hear you proceeding condesending tones
the mere you thinking interesting moans
to fake to me, like i was mute and deaf,
so take so carefully into account
the ammount of my mind could crush twenty of yours,
denounce behind my back, the force of intellect,
so expect to be infected with something out of the dark
ever had that dream where you stark
naked in the middle of nowhere
staked in the heart with ontly the tear---
ing sound of flesh, no faces only darkness
pure madness within this brain
refrain from trying to hurt me longer
stain my clothes green with envy and name me a whoremonger


every word i heard, a lie-------------------------------------



peace

DirtBoy69 07-25-02 07:06 AM

emotion like crazy i really see how much you hate her but it just seems a little extreme to me on that point it had strong rhyming and good use of volcab too. keep that shit up

varentao 07-25-02 01:28 PM

raw...venting...emotions taken to the extreme...really captured the 'torment' that you seem, to be suffering within and the...erm....damn cant find the word for it...the 'control' lets say (not the word i was looking for, but it will do), that you are showing by not letting rip at her or something...anyway...respect....

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 07-26-02 08:03 AM

Vent dat anger ... woooohoooo

Lmao diggin dis ...
Can relate!

Keep doin ur thang,
keep it real ...

~1~


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