Showstopper vs Jigsaw
 

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Jigsaw has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 09:32 PM.

Showstopper has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 10:00 PM.

just watch how i freestyle and merk this whore
cant handle me if this battle was with metaphors
Cus if u a true showstopper u must fuckin suck
you must be slap boxing just like Mc Firetruck
u D/R spul so much no wonder y its spul sickness
cus when his finger snaps u act with a quickness
No hate but how u gonna D/R a taliban Rapper
poppin Spuls cherry more then a whipper snapper

you an ugly mu fucka, no wins, nothing to mount
Only way you 20 times better than me, is in yo post count
Zero's across the board, man, you're wack, thats my perception
Got a KO in yo usertitle, but it ain't in yo direction
YEa, I'll 5-0 you, man, you're fuckin' wit the best
I'ma do like yo avy, and put yo fuckin' ass to rest
A boy named Jig watched us battle by the law
And a 5-0 KO for you, is what jig, saw

w/e didn't spend much time. but uppin...

Voted For: Jigsaw

this was an average battle in my opinion:
opener: jigsaw
multis: n/a
structure: jigsaw
punches: jigsaw
closer: jigsaw
this was not 1 of the best battles i've seen but jigsaw won my vote cuz he came harder den showstopper & hit wit more punches thru out; sho stopper & jigsaw both need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & both work on ur wordplay
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Showstopper

both were pretty stupid, but SPul won it........ too bad hes gone right?

This was feedback posted for Showstopper
 

peepin' this looooooooooooooooool...........................

Voted For: Showstopper

Showstopper

you an ugly mu fucka, no wins, nothing to mount
Only way you 20 times better than me, is in yo post count
^good opener

Zero's across the board, man, you're wack, thats my perception
Got a KO in yo usertitle, but it ain't in yo direction
^nice bar,feeling it

YEa, I'll 5-0 you, man, you're fuckin' wit the best
I'ma do like yo avy, and put yo fuckin' ass to rest
^last line's good,first one's self-glorification

A boy named Jig watched us battle by the law
And a 5-0 KO for you, is what jig, saw
^don't like your closer

Okay battle from you, not too many creative punches or personals but they were pretty good. Vocab wasn't too complex, bit basic but it didn't really affect the verse. Was feeling your flow and structure was good as well,just try to get more original and hardhitting personals (or punches) next time but was good read.


Jigsaw

just watch how i freestyle and merk this whore
cant handle me if this battle was with metaphors
^self-glorification

Cus if u a true showstopper u must fuckin suck
you must be slap boxing just like Mc Firetruck
^good good

u D/R spul so much no wonder y its spul sickness
cus when his finger snaps u act with a quickness
^hmmm,not really feeling it

No hate but how u gonna D/R a taliban Rapper
poppin Spuls cherry more then a whipper snapper
^nice closer

Right,so you had 2 nice hardhitting bars but the opener was pure self-glorification and the third bar wasn't that good in fact.You had more creativity though,flow was on lock and structure was nice. Found good balance with your vocab but get the self-glorification outta ya system.

My vote goes to Showstopper because I was feeling his punches a bit more...no hate...

DQ

This was feedback posted for Jigsaw
 

wack battle............................................ ........

u D/R spul so much no wonder y its spul sickness
cus when his finger snaps u act with a quickness
^hmmm,not really feeling it

^^^if u look in SPULS sig it says spul sickness thats where I got that from. :thumbup: