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Artemis 02-22-05 01:18 PM

Element vs PuLSe
 
Battle Rules:

8-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-25-05 at 01:18 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 02-23-05 01:32 AM

Element has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 01:32 AM.

Element 02-23-05 01:34 AM

Lets do this...


I dont got enough time, to diss you using great rhymes
When Im done there wont be a Pulse, just straight lines
fuck this kid yall, I dont even mean to sound all sexist
But hes wack wearin a cowboy hat, shovelin horse crap in Texas
My Lexus is blingin, while your swingin round ya lasso
I 'swear' to tell the truth, I think your a fucking asshole
You think Im just a newb, acting like you can walk right through
Ill plug my 'keyboard' into 'speakers', so I can 'stereotype' you
I cant be rattled or out-battled, get that through your skull
You aint new to RV, your just a newb-bashing bitch named SPuL...

System 02-23-05 04:52 PM

PuLSe has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 04:52 PM.

Artemis 02-23-05 05:00 PM

You call yourself a herb, so you must grow out the "earth"
If you got a penny for each my votes, a nickel's what you're worth
You say you're spittin' "fire", like a dragon, out yo mouth
Well, my flow is jus like "water", so I wash yo fire out
I'll "air" you out wit ease, 4 elements you fuckin' pussy
Battling me, you're hurting your life, like you out and playin' hookie
It's a lose-lose situation, for this fuckin' dulse
I win, you get a L, you win, you're without a PuLSe

~Tony Green~ 02-23-05 05:42 PM

Voted For: Element

This was a close one but Tony Green is gonna have to vote for Element.
Pulse you was iight but you fell off at the end.
Element was consistant with his attack.
But close battle!

Da_Throwdest 02-23-05 06:54 PM

Voted For: Element

this was a good battle 2 view on da real:
opener: element
vocab: element
punches: both
structure: element
closer: element
element wins my vote cuz he hit wit harder punches thru out this battle & he came harder; pulse u came good in it 2 but u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes no hating
make sure 2 return the favor

Verdikal 02-23-05 07:11 PM

This was feedback posted for PuLSe
 
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Element 02-24-05 12:58 AM

Fuck checking polls bitch ^^^ Try actually voting...
Upping....

Element 02-24-05 03:33 AM

Upping.........

RiDiKiLLoZ 02-25-05 09:54 PM

Voted For: Element

STYLE:
nice, i enjoyed both drops, good style and concepts

PUNCH:
good hits guys, props for "wash ur fire out" n "stereotype" lines, creative; decent hits PuLSe, but i think Element came harder

F:
awesome flow, good freestyle, consistent thruout

T:
nicely worded PuLSe, Element good drop, all around well performance

S: Element > PuLSe
P: Element > PuLse
F: Element > PuLSe
T: Element > PuLSe
OVERALL: PuLSe if this was 1 of the many other battles ive read, u wouldve won Ez, u got punched out by Element here tho
VOTE: Element

DQ 02-26-05 06:25 AM

Voted For: Element

PuLSe

You call yourself a herb, so you must grow out the "earth"
If you got a penny for each my votes, a nickel's what you're worth
^like first line, not feeling second one

You say you're spittin' "fire", like a dragon, out yo mouth
Well, my flow is jus like "water", so I wash yo fire out
^bit self-glorification here, bleh...

I'll "air" you out wit ease, 4 elements you fuckin' pussy
Battling me, you're hurting your life, like you out and playin' hookie
^okay okay

It's a lose-lose situation, for this fuckin' dulse
I win, you get a L, you win, you're without a PuLSe
^decent closer

Okay,opener's nice and you had some good punches but no real personals. Get more creative punchlines that hit harder, vocab was good. Had your flow on lock and structure was nice as well. Just use more bold lines next time to really bring the opponent down...no hate...


Element

I dont got enough time, to diss you using great rhymes
When Im done there wont be a Pulse, just straight lines
^good opener

fuck this kid yall, I dont even mean to sound all sexist
But hes wack wearin a cowboy hat, shovelin horse crap in Texas
^hehe,funny

My Lexus is blingin, while your swingin round ya lasso
I 'swear' to tell the truth, I think your a fucking asshole
^decent bar

You think Im just a newb, acting like you can walk right through
Ill plug my 'keyboard' into 'speakers', so I can 'stereotype' you
^okay okay

I cant be rattled or out-battled, get that through your skull
You aint new to RV, your just a newb-bashing bitch named SPuL...
^first line bleh, second rofl

Good punches and funny personals in there, not too much played content. Flow was good,found good balance with your vocab. Nice wordplay here and there, structure was good and haven't got any bad comments. Was good battle!

My vote goes to Element because I just felt he had more hardhitting punches and such in there...please rtf...

Bangalore 02-28-05 12:02 PM

Voted For: Element

omg kid lol murdered haha that was some sick shit for jus out the block... nice drop on both sides... def feel'n this verse specially the keyboard speaker line haha stereo typing thats shit is creative hahaha...

element took ...
opener
closer
multis
metas
punches
personals
structure

pulse... yuou had a alright flow but it jus wasnt up to the calibur of ele

return the honest vote link is in the sig

Vote//Element


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