DeJure the Raw vs. Devine Visionary
 

Listen all we need are VOTES

This site sleeps to much this battle has been up since Monday.


Devine Visionary:


F.Y.I's:More holes in cheezy emcees.....Swiss cheese

well then here we go
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let ya know off jump, i put so many holes in cheezy emcees, i got Kraft holdin grudges//
My metaphoric presentation of punches cease life lines, yours feel more like shoulder nudges//
broken mentals leavin thins nigga w/ brain crutches, wordplay displayed in such an uncanny fashion, dawg i Punch more than Hawaiian//
you claim to be The King of this Lyriced Jungle, c'mon dawg fibs are 4 kids everyone knows you lion (lyin)//
Just stop tyrin ya whole style is irrelevant, if you fought the cashier at the box office will be the only way you get a fare(fair) fight//
You scared right, predict nightmares for this sprockett, best cuddle up w/ moms tonite//
I will ignite flames under ya ass, just to see you drop hot shit//
played line but you still can't fucks w/ mine, i'm driving catz back w/ ease, you still earning ya learners permit//


need a breath............okay back to work


My worse verse leaves closed caskets at funerals, fathers heart filled with hatred off the words i stated//
underated but elevated, created ways to keep mines sedated and freeze bodies froms souls vacated//
My skillz are heavyweighted, this niggas like garbage on the trash day, it's time you've been put on the curb//
i beat this herb with murderous nouns & killer verbs, acknowledge the obvious, to you i am superb//


here it is dawg you got until 4:45 est to post or it's a DQ






Dejure the Raw's verse:


Devine you wack,well ya verse was hardly-a-rap//I'ma say tha same thing ya girl said," man you have to cum-harder-than-that/ What R U doin"//suprised if anyone read your verse and sat-threw-it// I'd play off your verse, but thats tha only way i'd probably-lose-it//

you wont blow even if wind hit your cremation//forget radio,stick to sony, thats tha only way you'll ever play-station//.....yeh my words harsh,I'm not-kind// your name sounds like a T.V sychic, now tha only thing you missen is tha hot-lines//I'm not-lyin//

think you tha sh*t cuz bought you a dell// well I'ma flip tha commercial,heres my version,"Dude,your gettin an L"//

you think people care that your verse-redder?//or that you must flow-better,, just because of tha use of your bold-letters//.......your a herb, and you know its true//you could take steroids,virgen, i'll still get more cut than you......

the count is 3-1 my way.

Vote=Devine Visionary

Flow-Devine Visionary
Punches-Devine Visionary
Multis/inners-Dejour
wordplay-Devine Visionary
Overall-Devine Visionary

Off~Center i love you man.It is taking so long to get votes thanx.


4-1

uppin for the longest battle i've ever had.

NICE BATTLE....FEELIN BOTH EMCEES.....BOTH OF YALL CAME HARD BUT DEVINE GOT THIS BATTLE....HE JUST HAD HARDER PUNCHES,DOPE METAS AND A GOOD FLOW....DONT GET ME WRONG DEJURE WAS NICE TO..HAD NICE MULTIS AND YA HAD SOME GOOD LINES TOO BUT I THINK DEVINE....JUST EDGED THIS ONE OUT...


VOTE=DEVINE..