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MoTHEKOOLKID 02-23-05 07:58 AM

in the world.........
 
As the days brighten good fight evil for less violence.. your rights pushed in to the dark left in silence.you have no strengh to restrain the beast ....at an angle pointing from the far east....corroption incresse to the world decease...from war or discesses....stuck livin without a reason.... no love or peace......just murder and people fiightin..over g''$...fucking there peoples for millions..young kid growin up to be villians......for know i just sit back and try to relax ..the only thing ever the goverment will get from me is tax.... :shoot:

Dirty Nigga 02-23-05 08:50 AM

Woah

Structure was all over the place

But for a newb, an his first verse on the site, its not all that bad, structure needs ta be improved, an you need ta learn how ta connect punches too your flow, but it was okay, you have potential

Drop some feed on my Peice called 'Hot' featuring my boy Blaze


Peace


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