Red Road - New from Desperado Ent.
 

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hook - J.D. Luciano
1st - Soo Fresh
2nd - Ill-Mental (me)
3rd - Castillo
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First impression-- Sounds nice.. Sort of a Limp Bizkit type of sound.. Soo Fresh sounds aiight I guess.. Maybe kinda like the Outlaws.. You sound pretty good on the mic bro, your flow is sort of normal stuff that you hear in a lot of commercial tracks.. Castillo sort of sounds like you but I can hear small differences.. Your two voices complement each other pretty well on a track.. You do sound slightly the same though so maybe thats not the best thing.. But you never know..

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it was a good song nothin fancy but it has kinda of a rock type vibe 2 it but overall quality was nice i'll give it 8.0/10

listenin as I type... hook is kinda catchy, south type feel to the first verse, its not really my thing but its better than alot of the south shit I've heard, 2nd verse had alot more energy to it, haha fast paced style, i kinda like it- you really gotta listen to catch everything you say but the lyrics are pretty good, 3rd verse is egh, not as entertaining as the first two... but like i said this song aint really my thing... all in all not a bad join though... keep active..1

EDIT: but, yeah that outtro has to go, just heard it and its like wtf? outta nowhere... 1

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1 more time... i want a couple more listens

aight the beat i aight...

chorus was kinda catchy

1st dude- flow was on point...lyrics were aight...delivery was pretty good

2nd- aight flow was on point...got a fast slow thing going....lyrics were good...i dont like how you ended it with the pause and then the last line...delivery was good

3rd- flow was good...delivery was pretty good...lyrics were aight...sound like you got a few breathe control problems in a couple of spots but not bad...


overall this was a good joint...peace


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