uncontained
 

my thourghts unleashed/
if truth be told/
i know this shit gettin old/

my minds on a rampage/
the mind knows the knowlegde like a mage/
this rhymes goes bang/
& the next thing u know im preformin wiv wu tang/
old news hits bac @ me/
shit jus wont let me b/
memories come bac/
like wen biggy was friends wiv 2pac/
Ive lost the feeling for love/
yet he smiles down from above/

{chours}
now my minds uncontained/
my thourghts unleashed/
if truth be told/
i know this shit gettin old

say to god im sorry/
cuz the way my life so gorey/
cuz every1 dies, every1 lies/
but theres no 1 day where i wish Id pass by/
i wish that god would take away the evil/
no one pullin stunts like evil canevil/
wish sum1 would look out for the kids/
no more fools try'n' sid/
this is my time/
the shit that comes out is breakin my spine/

{chours x3}
now my minds uncontained/
my thourghts unleashed/
if truth be told/
i know this shit gettin old

i have 1 life & i intend to use it wisely/
dont spread lies bout thy/

i def feel the way you think

the flo was mediocre

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thnx man uppin 4 more

uppin cmon

i thought it was pretty good all of the mechanics are there solid flow alright volcab and all

thnx very much m8

yo ths was good dude. But where the fuck are u? i aint seen u in ages hit me up!

sleepin man well ill hit u up 2 moro bout 7.30

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yo ya whole thing was killa keep doin ya thing dogg

yo, shit was tight dog
 

it wasnt the best ive ever read but it gets props

that shit was good.....not just cuz it had a good flow but cuz i could tell you were flowin from da heart.......dats mwhat i like bout yo pieces......you mean da shit dat you sayin......
yo hit me up on mah shit....CRAZY HOE and SICC SPIT
they both strait but look out fo some ill colabs too come

thanx doggs ill holla @ yo rhymes now

I like da chorus ... tight/
Ok flow ...
Keep spittin da real ...

1luv
pz

thnx very much uppin 4 more cmon