"Second Chances"
 

One of my newest songs I did...

www.soundclick.com/PrimitiveNature

or link in my sig, and lowfi plays in my sig..

uppin

iight that shits playin right off the page, nice... typin while listening...

quality is kinda crusty, not horrible but somethins not right, sounds kinda like when i mix tracks :thumbup: - flow was o.k, i mean you never really went off on the beat, all the rhymes were fairly basic, you had the sing song vibe goin but it was kinda sloppy to me... I'd like some more content in the song personally, keep droppin em though (and leave feedback on two songs before you post songs)

this track was dope...the lyrikal content was good...the quality was dope...you flowed on beat throughout...your emotions were good...good shit man, but you already know what i think...holla back...1

word decent track very basic but elevation is for salvation all in all ok plz respond to sick of this by yours truly and seven theezy pz :thumbup:

thanx for the feed