::..:$lobK::..: vs Unknown prospecT
 

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Check in by: 02-23-05 at 07:16 PM

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Unknown prospecT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 06:46 PM.

::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 07:10 PM.

ya rhymes dont cut it...tryn to stab wit a dull knife
i live rugged, but fuck it its my life,im just thuggin
ya buggin...think ya words can hurt me
i know ya name aint james, cuz ya sho' not WORTHY
feel my reign as i disperse these, verses they flame
im a curse to the game just rememba the name
PROSPECT,i know ya ass weak and you aint even dropped yet,
ya name slob k, why is that, cuz you slob the knob
than get pounded from the back,ima phenomenon
n dog ya wack im droppin bombs much like sadaam in fact
ya flow like fuckin wit two condoms on, no feelin that
and if you dont feel me,well feel my gat cuz i bust freely
no matter where im at

you got me but i dont give a fuck it is what it is

i dont rap i smack niggas and dick bitches

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

$lobk won dis hands down i dont think i really need to explain myself just say he had nice flow fix structure a lil bit hard hittin punches unknown prospect elevate

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

this pretty easy battle to decide, heres what i see....

Yprospect
>ya rhymes dont cut it...tryn to stab wit a dull knife
i live rugged, but fuck it its my life,im just thuggin
-first okay, 2nd line, pointless 3/10
>ya buggin...think ya words can hurt me
i know ya name aint james, cuz ya sho' not WORTHY
-i dunno, really weak....5/10
>feel my reign as i disperse these, verses they flame
im a curse to the game just rememba the name
-again, first line good, but second just went nowhere...4/10
>PROSPECT,i know ya ass weak and you aint even dropped yet,
ya name slob k, why is that, cuz you slob the knob
-doesnt even rhyme, weak attempt at personal too...3/10
>than get pounded from the back,ima phenomenon
n dog ya wack im droppin bombs much like sadaam in fact
-not really rhymin well here....5/10
>ya flow like fuckin wit two condoms on, no feelin that
and if you dont feel me,well feel my gat cuz i bust freely
no matter where im at
-haha, first line was dope, second weak again...6/10

-man, you gotta elevate hardcore bud, sorry to come off all harsh, but your structure was bad, flow needs some work....had good ideas about punches and shit but you gotta up the vocab and wordplay to really make'em hit, nah mean....wird, keep elevatin yo

slobk....solid verse man, not gunna post it up though, in a hurry....i thought your strucure and flow were your weakest points, had good punches/personals and creativity, those were what stood out and really won this...but structure, was lacking, especially near the end...flow little off too....so, just keep that in mind next time, but solid verse man, intro was probs your best line...haha i laughed, same with the school/nerd one....keep elevatin man...wird

v/spitk

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

$ won with better vocab punches hit hard good structre and flow and ya metas were good also
best line-Of Course I'm Toppin' Ya, I Cant See Ya Game Man, Fuck The Binoculars,
Cuz Like A Nerd In High School, Your Name Alone Says That U Aint Popular
8/10

return the vote in my sig please

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

Slobk Aka Crip Lol Won Thiss Battle He Came Harder With His Punches And Personals..

Openor=Crip,Good Multies In Tha 1st Lines
Punches=Crip,Had More Creative Punches
Personals=None,Cus Crip Only Had 1
Wordplay=Crip,Cus Had More Wordplay In His Verse
Vokab=None
Structure=Crip,Strukture Fell Off But Wass Easier Ta Read
Closing=Crip,More Creative Closer And Nice Punch

/V SlobK...................