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bellabizzy 02-23-05 07:10 PM

Bellabizzy
 
First time postin on dis' site...lookin for feedback..good or bad ill take it...Bella~


From the time i was born,better yet when i was concieved
my only purpose in this life...entertain lyrically
17 years old grew up in da hood
people heavily doubting sayin that i never would
now im blowing up da spot,like the US in iraq
my words concave ya chest worst den a panic attack
9 years old my daddy left us for a whore
Mama turned ta crack after da divor-ice
me? i was left wit da weight of da world
no longer mama's baby or daddys lil girl.
Over the years the stress built up mentally
so i got a pen and a paper try to solve this shit sensibly
"Bizzy can flow",the younger kids spoke
Boys in da hoods claiming "chic here's a joke"
but i took the critisism equally"Yea Im a female but we'll settle it evenly"
Spit da first bar I had 15 left
Killed him wit "yea u good but dude i got breast"...(ha ha)
From dat day forward I had one thing in mind talent i could use evn dumb deaf and blind.
I spit lyrical truth,its just geniousness
I know dat aint a word but yet either is Bizzyness...(ok that was a lil much)
Im lyrically inclinded,i make a nigga hit rewind
play me over and over, got u saying "whats the last line"
Trust me i got more Ima femcee beast
and evn if you dont like me,Ima sexy female to say the least......(yea i know)

aite' maybe I went a lil bit over toward da end...but like i said bad critisism only makes u wanna prove someone wrong....1....~Bella

Da_Throwdest 02-23-05 08:07 PM

nice drop from ya ma i liked it alot but i like the cockiness cuz it helps u out wit ur skills & build ur ego.......lol but naw u got skills overall quality 8.5/10 keep up the good work

the iron 02-24-05 12:31 AM

Like The Verse, Good Introduction Of Yourself, You Kept It Personal Dog. Uppin On The Vocab And A Lil Imagination And You Got Somthin. Keep At It Son....

Dirty Nigga 02-24-05 08:44 AM

lol ^^
i think its female, an you callinn her dog (unless i'm wrong lol)

but nice shit, a littlebasic in places, but the flow was strong, vocab was there in places, it was dope shit
6/10


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