Gwantanaflow vs CeleriTy
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-23-05 at 08:23 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Gwantanaflow has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 07:53 PM.

Yo this dudes lame,
cant even spell his own name,
half Cellery with bad lettering,
so you could imagin,
how happy i was he was battlin,
homies a douch and ready to lose,
like blind dudes with the blues,
tryina crontrole a phone he cant use.

CeleriTy has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 08:15 PM.

^^ thanks man.. i'll return the favor when i get enough posts.. and dawg you think i could get in ur crew??

Voted For: CeleriTy

wow....i dont think a big explanation is necessary..so heres what i saw

fuck, celetry (or whatever), owned, he put more than 10 seconds of thought into his punches, they actually hit, some weak thou, but still, he had effective punches, good wordplay, vocab was a little lacking, need to up that and flow, some shit was a little off, but other than that...one sided battle

gwantanaflow, man, just spit somethin together eh....well, it had nice flow, bout it, you need to elevate alot, both yall didnt really come hard, but celerity had better punches...and man, you had nothing, you had maybe pinches, elevate, punches/personals, vocab, structure, wordplay, word

v/celerity

This was feedback posted for CeleriTy
 

i stiLL cant vote so im guna float around wit my 2cents racking up posts haha

STYLE:
im sorry Gwantanaflow, come again?... ok i stiLL dont get it
CeleriTy... the black and blue? KiLLer line.

PUNCH:
Gwanatana u need to deliver a stronger blow on these suckers man... this is what takes ur opponent down, i think ur barely itching him right now. hes coming at u with Lacis and "black'n'blues", ur trying to tell him he cant use the phone or something? id be SO hurt if i was him... need some work!

FLOW:
u started off good Gwan, lost it half way, read Cel's verse thru, u can vibe off the consistency

TECHNIQUE:
again the black'n'blue alone has got u cornered... quick, hit him wit the malfunctioning phone!

S: CeleriTy > Gwantanaflow
P: CeleriTy > Gwantanaflow
F: CeleriTy > Gwantanaflow
T: CeleriTy > Gwantanaflow
OVERALL: 1 sided victory
VOTE: CeleriTy hands down... but wait i cant vote!

tell u this CeleriTy, if u dropped something similar to this in our battle, i mightve worked up a sweat or 2 more than i did now

iight upping...for the win on this shiznit... THANK YOU..

Voted For: CeleriTy

yo cel took this easily the other cat came kinda preschoolish and cel just killed him with his punches nice creativity and a good structure but he didnt even need to do that to win this battle ..lol but return the fav http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174845

Voted For: CeleriTy

can someone say MURK...no hate

punches- celerity killed u here man...son look at this line:

this faggot thinks he's as nice as me...yea well not hardly
i come with real steal...he comes with plastic like a malibu barbie.
^^NICE

personals- na none really

wordplay- celerity had this yo...better wordplay..that tore ACL line was sick

flow and structure- both was really easy to read

vote- celerity by far...good battle celerity..

Voted For: CeleriTy

Gwantanaflow
your stucture was ight but the flow like you couldnt fit any punch in there, there just aint anything creative about your verse it flowes and rhymes but yo where the punches dawg that ish weak yo, up some vocab and throw in some creativty wittyness in there and you will be good. no hate

Celerity
alot better the stucture is better the punches hit better you just had the creativty that you need yo

no hate