Doing the Best I Can
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178602
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178456

yea, i just read some audio tutorials, and the quality of my songs will be alot better in the future. Leave feedback, i return the favor...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/dakahattrickmusic.htm

aight i fucks with the beat...flow was ehhh...needs polishing...went off a few times...breathe control problems...delivery needs some work as well...clarity could be better cant understand a lot of what u saying so i cant really rate the lyrics...overall wasn't feeling this joint.


return the feedback
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178661

couldn't hear your vocals...

flow is too choppy for this beat...

ur voice is okay


not good...not terrible

elevate

AMP those vocals and smooth out the flow


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