The Hit - Tmka"D" & Rell-i-Vent (H.B.C.)
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178657
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176963

this is a joint me a rell did for this tag team topical tourney...the topic that me and rell and our competitors got...was that we were hired to kill someone1 and we find out its a little girl we have to kill...we putting a interesting twist of events onto this joint. enjoy. And of course we won the tourney...lol...Anyway enjoy

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1973849&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1973849&q=Hi


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/t...ixcubemusic.htm

haha whats that godfather? my boy e.t did up a pretty dope beat w/ that sample in this beat... this shit was surprisingly good... i dunno if you two know each other in real life, but its difficult going back and forth over the internet on a track and keepin it goin... the deeper voice cat (one u shot e'rbody) had a smoother flow, sounded more confident, but the two of you were pretty good together... just keep polishing up on everything like anyone else..1

yea man...not to put their bisuniss outthere...but they live close...and so do i...so i might drop some tracks over dude house if he lets me...

:rolleyes:

ok the beat was pretty tight.........the flow was pretty tight......went good with the beat....i was feelin both of ya drops........it was pretty tight.........keep it up.........~1

shit is dope you nice doggie you hit me up to collab so you know i gotta check ya shit before i respond but you pretty nice so holla at me

nice ass track i like tha concept and how the story turned out

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178722

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178915

thanx for the props ^^ new links uppin for more feedback..wow wouldnt it be nice if everyone could up like me

lol, i was in the process of using this as a concept for a song...

but this shit is hot, feeling this shit alotttt. Way ya'll switching is ill, I don't under, beat is sick. Nice flow from both, lyrics was iLL. godfather tip was hot too...nice ass track...

i seen rell on a couple sites never ever heard em rapping but nigga is nice...better than i even expected flow was flawless..

lol geztik ripped as well ...rode the beat smoothly ..nice characteristic in ya delivery ..nicely throwed down on your part

and the last one would be TM...and yeaaaaa ya flow is gully nigga ..nice shit...i thought people were saying your voice was deep? ...well...any who ...Dope verse u had...u gotta unique style...nice voice n mic presence....

Overall track was a solid track...one of the nicest tracks i've heard on this board so far..good job



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lmfao..i listened to the wrong song ..my bad lol..imma keep this hear just because... i dont feel like erasing it..but it goes toward that song i listened to.

chea holmes, thiggity this shiggity shit iggity iz diggity dope. both yall must have bin at tha same house 2 record it. lol@ havin 2 kill a 8 year old girl, LOL, dope idea, werd

beat is diff, lyrics are basic doe..
flow is choppy sounding, even doe it seems to flow but it dont, idk lol
too much random shii, talkn and silence, quality is ok
emotion is fine for the beat...
6/10

on who's part because its two people on the track.....i would be the first one tmkad would be the 2nd and it's a cypher collab...so can u explain that feed... ps everything doesnt have to be super lyrical u digg...everyone isnt a canibus or a pun u know...that's what makes emcee's diffrent we dont all rhyme the same...plus its a story

i was talkn about 1st, i didnt listen to whole track cuz i thought it was one dude. i didnt read the thing lol

oh aight u the first person to ever say that about my flow on this track but its a first 4 everything peace and good looks on the feed