Me and 20 GRAND HOTTEST OUT...
 

wordness this track is pure fire........

ITS SOLDIER man.....HOT HOT HOT

www.soundclick.com/20grand

WORDNESS



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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1980441

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178000

what are u talking about

uppin for feedback

aight beat i'm feeling...

1st dude...flow was ok...need to work on breathe control...delivery was aight...clarity is off in some parts...lyrics were coo....

2nd dude- first dude i like ya rap voice...flow was was pretty good...delivery was aight...lyrics were coo...

chorus ehhh...

overall this was an aight joint


return the feedback
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178661

beat is okay

i like the lead in to the verse...good


both verses are good...

flows were on


nice track...more energy would take it up a notch


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it was a good beat & joint but there's no emotion & energy in this song tho it felt like u just did it just 2 say u put 1 togetha don't rush thru it take ur time & enjoy urself while puttin the music togetha

ok......thanks for the opinions and feedback..........

upppin

damn all the uppss.... lol o.k...

Hook, sounds nice- quality isn't perfect, but its better than before :thumbup: - your presence needs some help, but that comes with time, no way to really speed it up unless your out performing- I liked the first verse more than the second, just cuz 20 grands voice makes it tough for me... If you (20) could make your lyrics clearer I'd feel it more, but you just have this really low toned voice that melts into itself and it kinda bothers me personally- no hatred cuz your flow is cool- just needs polishing... stay up fellas, keep droppin and stay active.1

EDIT: - its not your voice(20)... Its your energy-- JUMP AROUND... lol - foreal just upp ur energy a bit more on the track... (both)

word.....its still fire tho.....last night 10 downloads